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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

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My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from tinaroberts35
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Very touching poem!
Hi this is jerrid from fanartreview and I want to say thank you for picking my picture for this poem! There are other pictures but you picked mine for this beautiful poem!
Sometimes God call his children home early because he got an awesome plan for them and also for these 3 babies that died in a house fire here in Milwaukee, Wisconsin!
I am so sorry for your loss and just know you're baby is watching over you now!
Great poem!
Jerrid

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
    Hi Miss Tina,
    I feel 4 Your pain...
    I feel it from every
    orafice, artery, and
    vein...
    I feel these things
    and so, very, much
    more...
    As Jesus Christ
    closes my bedroon door...
    Thanks,
    Richard Edward Smrkovsky.
    "Ricky 1024."
Comment from Angels27
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There is all of the above emotions you mentioned in the AN interwoven in an inextricable manner. The poem is very deep and profound. The words are hard hitting.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
    ThankYou so very, very, very much
    for your considerations and continual
    support.
    This is my reason to exist...
    Top write is to of course, to express
    is to of course, to love is to have
    faith, and to love is...a...Gift From
    God to us the lonely, unaware, and pained...
    {>{>{>{>{>{>{>{>GOD HAS RISEN!{>{>{>{>{>}>}>}>}>}>}>{>{>{>}>}>{>}Richard Edward Smrkovsky.
    "Ricky1024.'
    {father Time.}
    Ricky the Rickertier" The Guiding
    Light Teaching but never Preaching
    here, leading the choir at this and
    many other sites and regimes here,
    on ...FAN STORY! "Nuff" has said
    ENOUGH!
Comment from Dollie Mason
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This is beautifully written with many tears and much greif. It is always sad when a child is called to heaven. I was thinking I now have as many loved ones on the other side and I still miss them.well done.


dm

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
    Thank You my Dear Miss Dolly,
    So sorry won't be that day,
    but not a tear shall drop from
    the Heavens Above now,
    4... I must be strong Now!
    $ all three families are destroyed now...
    Thanks,
    Richard Edward Smrkovsky..