Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is very well written it makes things so much easier when you have a friend that you can rely I just knowing there there makes all the difference well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012

Thank you Jill I hope your Mum is better my friend xx

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

If this is for the James I think it is, they will get better and better. Your write is very caring girl and I hope he takes it to heart.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012

It's a friend I knew before FS who is facing a bit of a trial just now. i hope he knows Gungalo. Thanks for reading and reviewing once again :) Jaq x

reply by Gungalo on 14-Nov-2012

Smile.

Comment from Jamezy

Excellent

THANK YOU JAQ CEE... LOVE THIS.. NO MORE TALK OF GIVING UP WRITING PLEASE.. WOULD BE SUCH A SHAME AND A LOSS TO YOUR GROWING NUMBER OF FANS... YOUR SO VERY GOOD WITH WORDS......

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012

Thanks James, just know that you are not alone my friend. Jaq x

reply by Jamezy on 14-Nov-2012

I know Jaq.... Thank you my friend...x

Comment from Spike the second

Excellent

Hi Jaq

Super poem. Can you take away my pain? I am here today after suffering all night with food poisioning. Bloody chicken from Sainsburys, delivered by van yesterday. I caught it but the rest of the family are fine. So today I am taking it as easy as I can, with a squeaky bum :)

I love your poems and this is really good.

Blessings

Spike

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012

Aww God bless you Spike, I was beginning to wobble about whether or not to continue writing. Sorry to hear about your food poisoning, I'd be reporting them to Public Health.

Look after yourself and make sure you have a loo roll in the fridge :) Jaq x

reply by Spike the second on 14-Nov-2012

Luckily we have a loo downstairs and I am in my office right next to it, but yes a loo roll in the fridge would help :)

Please don't give up, you have one appreciative fan right here and I am like a 4 year old learning from poems like yours. That one day I may step away from my usual inane drivel and write something serious :)

Blessings

Spike

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012

You are a lovely person. Thanks Spike. :) Jaq x

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Well written and composed poetry. The words flow with ease over sculpted phrases with form enhancing the impact. The call to join hands is endearingly enticing. The love and support is freely offered. The artwork perfectly supports the whole. Well done!

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012

Thank you so much Treischel for your kind review. :) Jaq x

Comment from JennLikestoWrite

Average

I like how you wrote this short poem. What I liked was the picture that was picked and just the importance of what it's about.

You did a good job writing it.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012

Thanks Jenn, for reading and reviewin my poem. :) Jaq x