Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

ooh yes, I see what you mean. Nasty. You have done a brilliant job with this Jaq and love the lay out - you are a clever girly :D really clever write this one xx

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013

Cheers Indie glad you liked it :) Jaq xx

Comment from Shirley B

Exceptional

This is a beautifully well written nonet. I understand why it is the winner of the contest. I like that you chose to rhyme the lines in your poem. The rhyming made the poem more passionate. Your message came through very clearly in the poem. Thank you for sharing your work. Great job, Shirley

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

Thanks for that Shirley I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Jaq c

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

Truly excellent nonet! And a well earned win - this is one of the best I've read - not at all contrived, or constricted by the form. Congrats!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012

Thank you very much visionary. Your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq x

Comment from EMB

Excellent

Wow. I'm wondering if his beauty was the initial attraction and now you've learned your lesson. Or was he just simply an unaware psycho? Whatever the case, it produced a great poem here.

Nicely done.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012

Thank you Edward. It was his charm. He came across as a caring, Christian man. He was so far away from that it was scary. Although I do thank him for the impetus to write that poem. :)Jaq x

Comment from amada

Excellent

Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a very well deserved win because you used all the requirements to work for the advantage of your story. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012

Thank you so much for your very kind review amada. :) Jaq x

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A selfish, self-centering lover does more harm than good. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Congratulations on your win.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012

Thank you so much for your kind words. :) Jaq x

reply by c_lucas on 14-Oct-2012

You're welcome, Jaq. Charlie.

Comment from megclare

Excellent

great use of the nonet form. The last word is so strong as a result. You've used rhyme effectively too. The artwork you've chosen adds extra depth - not that this poem needs any help!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012

Thanks megclare. Your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq x

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

This is a wonderful and a perfect nonet pom and an excellent entry for the contest too. It flows well with a story to tell. Nicely done.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012

Thank you Ola for your lovely appraisal. :) Jaq x

Comment from Tina McKala

Excellent

This was certainly a very good poem. The narcissus character was described really very well and the conclusion of the poem was so realistic. Good job!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012

Thank you very much Tina. :) Jaq x

Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

Poet,
Your Nonet poem about a narssissitic man is extremely well written with teriffic imagery painted by your nine lines of verse.
The art work is priceless you used.
You used excellent rhyme.
You used great metaphors: "play the part, tongue of lies, killed my soul and Stole my life."
You used very good alliteration with the T & P words.
I enjoyed your lines:
You used and abused me from the start,
Oh how you loved to play the part.
Mind so twisted, tongue of lies,
Never seen, your disguise.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your thought pondering Nonet poem to other reviewers.
Missy.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012

Thank you so much for your very kind review missy. Also thanks for the recommendation.