senryu (romney won debate)
A Senryu13 total reviews
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. It is the only way Romney could win a debate. I think a stupid factor is one way we chose candidates for office. Great work.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. It is the only way Romney could win a debate. I think a stupid factor is one way we chose candidates for office. Great work.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Hello elliejean, my friend, glad you like the write, I appreciate your time and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from Bina1
Perfect! What a fine poem, so short, sweet and to the point. I told my husband, as soon as the Yankees win the World Series and Romney is voted in, everything will be fine in the world. LOL!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Perfect! What a fine poem, so short, sweet and to the point. I told my husband, as soon as the Yankees win the World Series and Romney is voted in, everything will be fine in the world. LOL!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Hello Bina, my friend, I am pleased you like the write, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from sgalletti
Hah! Well, I absolutely agree with the sentiment in this nicely crafted senryu. Let's hope the same ontinues with the next two debates. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Hah! Well, I absolutely agree with the sentiment in this nicely crafted senryu. Let's hope the same ontinues with the next two debates. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Hello Sue, my friend, I am pleased that you like the write and congratulations, I believe you have won this contest; I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from Carrie Carson
I know...what happened? I was shocked. I think it must be harder to be president and run, Romney probably actually has down time.
No spag, good form, right on the prompt.
Good luck in the contest. :) Carrie
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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I know...what happened? I was shocked. I think it must be harder to be president and run, Romney probably actually has down time.
No spag, good form, right on the prompt.
Good luck in the contest. :) Carrie
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Carrie my friend, I agree with your reflections about the debate, Obama's gonna make it in the next two; I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
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Of course, you're welcome. :)
Comment from Joan E.
You very cleverly picked up on the "New Yorker" cover in your satirical senryu. I'm glad this contest allows your poem to be showcased. Good luck in the voting booth. -Joan
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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You very cleverly picked up on the "New Yorker" cover in your satirical senryu. I'm glad this contest allows your poem to be showcased. Good luck in the voting booth. -Joan
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Joan my friend, so glad you like the write, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Peter@Poole
This is surely a perfect senryu as I understand the form. It has a situation described in two lines and a comment in one line. Well done. peter.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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This is surely a perfect senryu as I understand the form. It has a situation described in two lines and a comment in one line. Well done. peter.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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I appreciate the time and the encouraging review my friend, thank you very much.
Comment from mumsyone
Thanks for entering the contest with a senryu that follows all the rules and uses good artwork, too. It should be a good contender in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thanks for entering the contest with a senryu that follows all the rules and uses good artwork, too. It should be a good contender in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Hello mumsyone, my friend, I am glad you like the write, I thank you for the visit as well as sponsoring the contest, take care.
Comment from Gungalo
LOL fer real Ameen? This is too funny for words. He won the debate over who? LOL. SO stupid our politics are eh? Now what? Hehehehe.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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LOL fer real Ameen? This is too funny for words. He won the debate over who? LOL. SO stupid our politics are eh? Now what? Hehehehe.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Gunga my friend, glad you like the silly write, appreciate the time and the wonderful review, thank you my friend.
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Smiling at you!!
Comment from Spitfire
I think you're allowed to use capitals for names in this short form. I didn't watch the debate but I heard that Obama was lost without his teleprompter. Still, it will be a close call this year. Good luck in contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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I think you're allowed to use capitals for names in this short form. I didn't watch the debate but I heard that Obama was lost without his teleprompter. Still, it will be a close call this year. Good luck in contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Shari my friend, I thank you for the wonderful review, I agree that it's gonna be a close race, however, there are still two debates to go and the sad thing about U.S politics is that people are easily manipulated by the political pundits, T.V networks, etc., majority lacks the skill to analyse/evaluate each candidates vision for America; I thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, ameen, you did an excellent job writing this senryu poem about the debate. it made me smile and i love the picture. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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this is very well written, ameen, you did an excellent job writing this senryu poem about the debate. it made me smile and i love the picture. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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swj my friend, glad you like the write, appreciate the time and the wonderful review, thank you my friend.