My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 181 "(Haiku) Autumn Leaves"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from RJ
A very nice poem that gives us a good visual of leaves as they fall during autumn. The poem had good syllable count. I didn't see anything to change. RJ
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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A very nice poem that gives us a good visual of leaves as they fall during autumn. The poem had good syllable count. I didn't see anything to change. RJ
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much RJ, a pleasure to hear your review.
Comment from Eliza M
lovely picture Jaq, to enhance your delightful little haiku wih its perfect 5 7 5 (17) syllable count. I would only suggest you drop the 's' on blankets as I don't think its a grammatically correct verb form. What say you? Liz.x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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lovely picture Jaq, to enhance your delightful little haiku wih its perfect 5 7 5 (17) syllable count. I would only suggest you drop the 's' on blankets as I don't think its a grammatically correct verb form. What say you? Liz.x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Your right Liz, thank you so much for your review, it helps a lot. :) xx