Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend you have done very well with this poem it definitely describes something which is evil ,this reads very strongly enhanced by the art work well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012

They must have very dark spirits to do what they do Jill, thanks for your review. As with the others I will get around to reading your work very soon. Jaq x

Comment from mr elis

Excellent

Is this paper showing the writer's imagination of hell or the eternal punishment,the poor souls-that end up there will suffer for eternity.?Just to think of the darkness alone,will sure force one to change his-or-her way of living.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012

It was about an abuser and how I perceive him to be. If it made them change their way of life it would be wonderful. Thank you me elis. Jaq x

Comment from wordsareus

Excellent

This is a very dark and powerful poem. It's good that you added how it's a portrait of an abuser at the top. Sometimes it's hard to read between the lines and to always understand what the subject matter is correctly.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012

Thanks for reading and commenting wordsareus, it's very much appreciated. Jaq x

Comment from Curtis Hatch

Excellent

This is a black poem with a sinister meaning. Dark, purulent, festering soul sucks one's inner life and sends them hell-bound into perennial darkness after feasting on hopes and dreams. Curtis

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012

Thank you Curtis your words are appreciated greatly. Jaq x