My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Love Unfair"All of my poems of release.
2 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done so very well in this poem cancer can wreck so many lives it is a terrible illness this is such a sad poem well written and presented well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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Yes you have done so very well in this poem cancer can wreck so many lives it is a terrible illness this is such a sad poem well written and presented well done regards Jill
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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Thanks once again for your appraisal Jill. Every little comment helps me to gain confidence. :)
Comment from terry drake
The story line to your poem was interesting and the rhyme scheme was well chosen. The poem structure and the cadence was hard to maintain in my review.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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The story line to your poem was interesting and the rhyme scheme was well chosen. The poem structure and the cadence was hard to maintain in my review.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your constructive criticism once again Terry. I still have a lot to learn :)