Comment from yndemand

Excellent

internal rythm, ending rythm and syllable count good. The picture accented your words as it should. discover each other That sounds like fun Good job good luck

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2012

Comment from PoesyPoet

Excellent

OH la la! What a nice and ever so sexy little doodle called the essence. I think it's a perfect contest entry. Best of luck! PP

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2012

Comment from elliejean

Excellent

I like the picture. I like the poem. Reminds me of the times undercover. Discovering the thrill of my husbands. Great work.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2012

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This meets all the qualifications of the essence poem. It is well written and nicely illustrated. So few words used to say what is in your heart. Good job!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2012

Comment from Connie C

Excellent

I like how all four of your rhyming words rhyme with each other.
And you certainly do make a point in so few words. Best of luck
to you in the contest. Connie

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2012

Comment from Galactia

Good

you did an excellent attempt at this form. but you have the 2 rhyming couplets at the endf but you forgot to include 2 internal rhymes as well.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012

Hi Tia, you are absolutely right...I did forget to include two internal rhymes...I have gone back and edited...thanks so much for bringing that to my attention...blessings.

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

I like very much your essence poem here. Your choice of art complements your words beautifully, making this a picture perfect presentation.

It was a real pleasure to read you today

Thank you
Dinah

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2012