Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Jaxson Phoenix
A beautiful work. I am afraid any words I would use to describe this would fall painfully short of giving it its just reward, so I will only say well done and live forever in awe of your talents.
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A beautiful work. I am afraid any words I would use to describe this would fall painfully short of giving it its just reward, so I will only say well done and live forever in awe of your talents.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2005
Comment from Delhini
It would take forever to answer all the questions in this poem... but I LOVE QUESTION MARKS in poems... Thank you.
I will tackle the last one... the best one. Can I truly Love???
love... the word... should always be spelled with a capital "L". Love, Love and... YES. Thank You.
Love
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It would take forever to answer all the questions in this poem... but I LOVE QUESTION MARKS in poems... Thank you.
I will tackle the last one... the best one. Can I truly Love???
love... the word... should always be spelled with a capital "L". Love, Love and... YES. Thank You.
Love
D
Comment Written 08-Feb-2005
Comment from Bryana
Many questions are asked in your poem. I believe the answer would be yes!
Sing a song to the blind.
A smile to the deaf,
To the barren hope;
Teach the homeless
to bake bread.
Don't consider yourself useless.
With love, understanding and
persistence, you will help!
Lovely poem. Thank you.
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Many questions are asked in your poem. I believe the answer would be yes!
Sing a song to the blind.
A smile to the deaf,
To the barren hope;
Teach the homeless
to bake bread.
Don't consider yourself useless.
With love, understanding and
persistence, you will help!
Lovely poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2005
Comment from Graceheart
WOW, wow, WOW!!!! This is the most wonderful read! You truel can and will love forever becuase you have the heart for it! You have the capacity to understand love, to k now it, to embrace it! You have a precious, ever after type of Love to give to a soul only deserving of it! You are a woman of Love who shall give it and receive it in its entirity! Wonderful read and touching message!
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WOW, wow, WOW!!!! This is the most wonderful read! You truel can and will love forever becuase you have the heart for it! You have the capacity to understand love, to k now it, to embrace it! You have a precious, ever after type of Love to give to a soul only deserving of it! You are a woman of Love who shall give it and receive it in its entirity! Wonderful read and touching message!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2005
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Wow, my friend. I think that may possibly be the best piece of writing I have read from your pen. That is so true to life. Love is so much more and sometimes it is hard to provide that love to the ones who are so in need of it. We let society rule our beliefs and feelings and forget to feel and give with the heart God gave us to feel with. Excellent wake up call here. Bet you thought I had abandoned you. I am so far behind. I'm trying to work my way down the list. Love and hugs, JL
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Wow, my friend. I think that may possibly be the best piece of writing I have read from your pen. That is so true to life. Love is so much more and sometimes it is hard to provide that love to the ones who are so in need of it. We let society rule our beliefs and feelings and forget to feel and give with the heart God gave us to feel with. Excellent wake up call here. Bet you thought I had abandoned you. I am so far behind. I'm trying to work my way down the list. Love and hugs, JL
Comment Written 04-Feb-2005
Comment from Lestina
Jewell,
Great Poem "Love", many questions going through your mind. The answer to these questions: Can I be an example of love Share love, Live love, Can I truly
love?
I would say..YES, YES, YES, and YES!
Well thought out questions Jewell, Great Writing! Fantastic Poem, Loved it!
Lestina
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Jewell,
Great Poem "Love", many questions going through your mind. The answer to these questions: Can I be an example of love Share love, Live love, Can I truly
love?
I would say..YES, YES, YES, and YES!
Well thought out questions Jewell, Great Writing! Fantastic Poem, Loved it!
Lestina
Comment Written 04-Feb-2005
Comment from ChryWizard
Very well written and expressed... A lot of questions are ask...but where....M'Lady will you seek the answers? Will you turn within? Will you seek a friends advice? Will you look at the choices before your eyes and choose wisely? This is a very deep and interesting read.... Thank you, Paul
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Very well written and expressed... A lot of questions are ask...but where....M'Lady will you seek the answers? Will you turn within? Will you seek a friends advice? Will you look at the choices before your eyes and choose wisely? This is a very deep and interesting read.... Thank you, Paul
Comment Written 04-Feb-2005
Comment from jonjo
In your need to dig deep into the philosophy of love and what it is, you have created a profound poem that asks many of the questions we all are beset by from time to time. There is love, lust and unconditonal love, and I think you are speaking of the latter here. Thanks for a wonderful read.
jj
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In your need to dig deep into the philosophy of love and what it is, you have created a profound poem that asks many of the questions we all are beset by from time to time. There is love, lust and unconditonal love, and I think you are speaking of the latter here. Thanks for a wonderful read.
jj
Comment Written 04-Feb-2005
Comment from Gremlinsmom
Wow! These are good questions that I've asked myself at different times in my life. And my answer usually is...I want to try! But I don't always succeed in doing the right thing. I think this may be my favorite one of yours so far. And you're so right, love is a verb. Great one! :)
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Wow! These are good questions that I've asked myself at different times in my life. And my answer usually is...I want to try! But I don't always succeed in doing the right thing. I think this may be my favorite one of yours so far. And you're so right, love is a verb. Great one! :)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2005
Comment from sengwriter
Your 'LOVE' is lovely. At least you though a good thought over some dire situation where a person to whom love is to be offered is very cool and indifferent. But your poem suggests that you or the loving author wants her endless desire for love to be shared with someone - my suggestion is don't spare or don't share your treasure unless you can change him to your choice.
Would you mind in making a small correction .....
' I received ' in place of ' I recieved ' (just the spelling) and ' betterment ' in place of ' betterness '
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Your 'LOVE' is lovely. At least you though a good thought over some dire situation where a person to whom love is to be offered is very cool and indifferent. But your poem suggests that you or the loving author wants her endless desire for love to be shared with someone - my suggestion is don't spare or don't share your treasure unless you can change him to your choice.
Would you mind in making a small correction .....
' I received ' in place of ' I recieved ' (just the spelling) and ' betterment ' in place of ' betterness '
Comment Written 04-Feb-2005
