The Red Dress
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "The Red Dress chapter forty-three"The story of a teenage girl
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Comment from wordsfromsue
Ooh Richard aka Robert Downey Jr. I'm voting for YOU to win Lisa's hand. You go boy! I can not even hazard a guess how this will turn out!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Ooh Richard aka Robert Downey Jr. I'm voting for YOU to win Lisa's hand. You go boy! I can not even hazard a guess how this will turn out!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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That's the whole idea! My sincere thanks for the wonderful marathon or reviewing my friend. You never fail to bring a smile to my face. Alexis x
Comment from rwilliam
WOW! Great chapter. Boy, these people sure jump to conclusions don't they! Sheesh! But makes for good reading!! :-D
I really didn't see anything to correct or tweak so off to read more! I'm really enjoying this so much! Thank you!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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WOW! Great chapter. Boy, these people sure jump to conclusions don't they! Sheesh! But makes for good reading!! :-D
I really didn't see anything to correct or tweak so off to read more! I'm really enjoying this so much! Thank you!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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I love you! Your reviews are always so encouraging. Thank you, my friend. Alexis x
Comment from axelbeariter
Since he'd split up with Carla the week before?/I don't remember you showing us that scenario. Did you and I forgot?----in fact,he would probably/Put a space before he----" But I thought you wanted me to tell Alan what had happened?" Pull the quote mark closer to But----You've written more twists in the last five chapters than a winning Olympic gymnast.----Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Since he'd split up with Carla the week before?/I don't remember you showing us that scenario. Did you and I forgot?----in fact,he would probably/Put a space before he----" But I thought you wanted me to tell Alan what had happened?" Pull the quote mark closer to But----You've written more twists in the last five chapters than a winning Olympic gymnast.----Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Lol, an Olympic gymnast I am not, but a vivid imagination I have. Lets just say I don't like to be predictable, as hopefully the last few chapters might prove. Yes, I just threw in the quick split with Carla for now because I had to free up Alan for a 'possible' reconciliation with Lisa. I will probably go back and elaborate a little before handing it into the publishers. My thanks again, Axil, your reviews mean a lot to me.
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You do need more on that. Any publisher will ask you the same question. Axel
Comment from Gideon300
At this point I don't envy Lisa the men in her life. Good storytelling really. I just wish the girl could get some good luck going.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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At this point I don't envy Lisa the men in her life. Good storytelling really. I just wish the girl could get some good luck going.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review and apologies for taking so long to thank you, things have been a bit hectic because of the number of chapters I've posted recently. Alexis x
Comment from James McCorkle
Top of the class. Go up and kiss the teacher.That's an old expression which we used to make when I was at schoolYou have really spun a marvellous tale here Alexis. What a fertile mind can do. Where did you go to school? How far did you go? I loved school and respected my teachers. Still can see their faces when I think of them. james
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Top of the class. Go up and kiss the teacher.That's an old expression which we used to make when I was at schoolYou have really spun a marvellous tale here Alexis. What a fertile mind can do. Where did you go to school? How far did you go? I loved school and respected my teachers. Still can see their faces when I think of them. james
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Funnily enough, James, it was an old castle in Edinburgh, before a convent in Surrey for a year to take A levels.... You didn't think this was all fiction, did you? I then married a wealthy stockbroker in the Isle of Man aged eighteen... Need I say more? I adored school, and English was my favourite subject. This is my idea of heaven, doing what I love, and sharing it.(would be nice to earn from it as well though!) I really believe in respect for teachers. Sadly, there doesn't seem to be a lot these days. Take care, Alexis X
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Yes Alexis. Resoect seems to have been lost somewhere along the line. Modern kids now use only electronic tools instead of their brains to pass exam's etc. so the teachers too are falling along the same lines. What a shame to waste good brains. Congratulations on your mind force. It doesn't need a kick start to hop along at a good rate. Keep a'chugging. Fond Regards. James.
Comment from AlexAX
Another cliff hanger hahaha Keep up the great work. I know you will :) Now Richard is looking after her? Well she has been through a lot. People need to start saying their true feelings. But then I guess I might not be so hooked lol Loved it. Alex :)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Another cliff hanger hahaha Keep up the great work. I know you will :) Now Richard is looking after her? Well she has been through a lot. People need to start saying their true feelings. But then I guess I might not be so hooked lol Loved it. Alex :)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review and apologies for taking so long to thank you for this lovely review. I think I'm answering everyone in the wrong order now because things have been a bit hectic. I'm delighted that your still enjoying the journey. Alexis x
Comment from LisaSilva
I don't know why Alan didn't say more about his actions. I guess that's what happens when you manipulate other people's feelings instead of sharing your heart. People see that as a weakness, but it's the most powerful tool on earth. Sad that Lisa lost the baby. I had three miscarriages before my first son was finally born. It's a heart wrenching experience.
Love, Lisa
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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I don't know why Alan didn't say more about his actions. I guess that's what happens when you manipulate other people's feelings instead of sharing your heart. People see that as a weakness, but it's the most powerful tool on earth. Sad that Lisa lost the baby. I had three miscarriages before my first son was finally born. It's a heart wrenching experience.
Love, Lisa
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your great review and apologies for taking so long to reply. Three miscarriages must have been heartbreaking. I only had one between my daughter and son, and I found it to be a really horrible experience. I bet your first son is the apple of his mothers eye! Love Alexis x
Comment from debskatz
Hi alexis,
Well, now, ain't that interesting! It's going to take a long while before she's able to hear what he has to say. Sure looks like she's got Richard, hook, line & sinker!
I definitely am looking forward to the next chapter! Bring 'em on! Oh, and I LOVE the 'no spag!' LOVE IT!!
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Hi alexis,
Well, now, ain't that interesting! It's going to take a long while before she's able to hear what he has to say. Sure looks like she's got Richard, hook, line & sinker!
I definitely am looking forward to the next chapter! Bring 'em on! Oh, and I LOVE the 'no spag!' LOVE IT!!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review and apologies for taking so long to thank you, things have been a bit hectic because of the number of chapters I've posted recently. Alexis x
Comment from Malerie
Well, Lisa has yet another protector. When will this end? The miscommunication seems to keep turning up. I don't really feel sorry for Alan, I'm sure most readers want them to be the happy couple; that's not always reality. I would like to see Lisa mature and perhaps on her own. Maybe one day she would met Alan or even Richard. Another good chapter, please keep writing; I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Well, Lisa has yet another protector. When will this end? The miscommunication seems to keep turning up. I don't really feel sorry for Alan, I'm sure most readers want them to be the happy couple; that's not always reality. I would like to see Lisa mature and perhaps on her own. Maybe one day she would met Alan or even Richard. Another good chapter, please keep writing; I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Don't worry, Richards the last one, no woman could be that lucky! Many thanks for your lovely review. Alexis x
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
You really do have a great imagination
Alexis, keeping the reader interested
throughout, leaving them wondering and
wanting more.
state to see Lisa[,](;) in fact(,) he would probably
matter-of-factly
he asked acidically, - do you mean acidly
Margaret
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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You really do have a great imagination
Alexis, keeping the reader interested
throughout, leaving them wondering and
wanting more.
state to see Lisa[,](;) in fact(,) he would probably
matter-of-factly
he asked acidically, - do you mean acidly
Margaret
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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I did indeed, Margaret. I think I made this mistake before, thank you so much for picking up on it. My sincere thanks for your review. Alexis x