Anger Confesses
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Comment from gazzagodbod
fantastic little poem the picture and presentation as rich and wonderful as the poem itself thank you so much and good luck gazzaxx
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fantastic little poem the picture and presentation as rich and wonderful as the poem itself thank you so much and good luck gazzaxx
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. Lost love will make you angry. Burn away the anger and love again. It will happen. Love your poem. Don't hate the one who rejected you. Pity him/her. They don't know the good thing they let get away.
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I love the picture. Lost love will make you angry. Burn away the anger and love again. It will happen. Love your poem. Don't hate the one who rejected you. Pity him/her. They don't know the good thing they let get away.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this poem about the anger that can consume us and we wish for the innocence to surround us again. good luck in the contest
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this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this poem about the anger that can consume us and we wish for the innocence to surround us again. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
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Comment from rchitwood
Anger is a very consuming emotion and it will destroy anyone who cannot get over it.Your poem has good description and strong emotional images.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
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Anger is a very consuming emotion and it will destroy anyone who cannot get over it.Your poem has good description and strong emotional images.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
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Comment from Alexander E Poet
This is very powerful piece , you have capture the truth and the reality of this mad feeling poetry that one can learn and feel from. very well done.
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This is very powerful piece , you have capture the truth and the reality of this mad feeling poetry that one can learn and feel from. very well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
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Comment from LisaSilva
And may you have what you hope for deep within your heart. Thank you for sharing your feelings. I always appreciate genuine emotion. It means so much to me to hear others speak their truth!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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And may you have what you hope for deep within your heart. Thank you for sharing your feelings. I always appreciate genuine emotion. It means so much to me to hear others speak their truth!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from journey30
A very aggressive write. The vocabulary is strong and well expressed.I can feel the emotions in this piece. My favorite lines are...My spirit afire with more loss than gains". "A soft voice lost amid a raging blaze". Nicely done on following the writing prompt.
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A very aggressive write. The vocabulary is strong and well expressed.I can feel the emotions in this piece. My favorite lines are...My spirit afire with more loss than gains". "A soft voice lost amid a raging blaze". Nicely done on following the writing prompt.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Wow! 6 stars! I am pleased you thought so highly of my poem to give it such a rating. Thank you F_ :)
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your poem is extremely well written with vivid imagery painting a picture in the readers head. The art work is wicked cool you used. I like your title. Great rhyme and excellent descriptive writing enhance your poem. You make effective use of great alliteration and metaphor in your poetry. I especially enjoyed the lines: "A soft voice lost amid a raging blaze The gentleness gone in the smoke and haze Like melted candles with their burning wicks An ashen soul left without a phoenix*" I also liked your phrases: "torturing my soul, dreams up in smoke, ashen soul left, fragile feelings I had, thoughts transform into bad and love taking flight." Your poem should do well in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest with your poem filled with the emotion of anger. I'd recommend your thought pondering poem to other reviewers. Thanks for sharing and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Missy.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Poet,
Your poem is extremely well written with vivid imagery painting a picture in the readers head. The art work is wicked cool you used. I like your title. Great rhyme and excellent descriptive writing enhance your poem. You make effective use of great alliteration and metaphor in your poetry. I especially enjoyed the lines: "A soft voice lost amid a raging blaze The gentleness gone in the smoke and haze Like melted candles with their burning wicks An ashen soul left without a phoenix*" I also liked your phrases: "torturing my soul, dreams up in smoke, ashen soul left, fragile feelings I had, thoughts transform into bad and love taking flight." Your poem should do well in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest with your poem filled with the emotion of anger. I'd recommend your thought pondering poem to other reviewers. Thanks for sharing and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Missy.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
You said, "Your poem should do well in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest with your poem filled with the emotion of anger
Unforunately, my poem did not do well in the writing contest. It received "0" votes. Oh well. F_ :(