Keith & Brianna
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Comment from snowflakemeltz
Very intriguing story and a good cliff hanger ending. Would love to read more of such enjoyable pieces. Keep up the excellent writing!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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Very intriguing story and a good cliff hanger ending. Would love to read more of such enjoyable pieces. Keep up the excellent writing!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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you're nice. thanks.
Comment from Dom G Robles
This story, part of a book, is excellent. The discussion of the two lovers, Keith and Brianna, is very enticing. They are going, looking for a motel where they can spend short moments where Brianna could go home in time for the curfew that her Mom had set. The next chapter would discuss further what the episode would be.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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This story, part of a book, is excellent. The discussion of the two lovers, Keith and Brianna, is very enticing. They are going, looking for a motel where they can spend short moments where Brianna could go home in time for the curfew that her Mom had set. The next chapter would discuss further what the episode would be.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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you're nice. thanks so much.
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Thank you. Dom