Sometimes in Life
Words to think on26 total reviews
Comment from beverly langford
In this poem I see words of counsel, direction and guidance. I love rhyming poem especially when they are not complicated. The flow and fit of wisely chosen words are shown in this poem. Very good.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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In this poem I see words of counsel, direction and guidance. I love rhyming poem especially when they are not complicated. The flow and fit of wisely chosen words are shown in this poem. Very good.
Comment Written 11-May-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Be glad when I can get back to writing more often your words are wonderful to read, thank you.
Larry
Comment from ladywiltse
This has a wonderful message ~ stop and smell the roses. We do lose focus when our mind takes us on trips far away from being in present moment. The fourth stanza, third line ~ I believe should be too, not to. It is never too late to change.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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This has a wonderful message ~ stop and smell the roses. We do lose focus when our mind takes us on trips far away from being in present moment. The fourth stanza, third line ~ I believe should be too, not to. It is never too late to change.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much I will check into that for sure. Glad you enjoyed it so much.
Larry
Comment from Amicus
Pretty good rhymed and rhythmic, smooth flowing "this is what I believe" poem, Larry. Not particularly original nor with any "knock the socks off" poetic merit, it is competent and meets the norm of FanStory criteria for excellence. Writing this sort of piece is always a good way to clarify for oneself what one believes and to pass it on to others.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Pretty good rhymed and rhythmic, smooth flowing "this is what I believe" poem, Larry. Not particularly original nor with any "knock the socks off" poetic merit, it is competent and meets the norm of FanStory criteria for excellence. Writing this sort of piece is always a good way to clarify for oneself what one believes and to pass it on to others.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thank you and I am glad you like it, Take care and have a wonderful day.
Larry
Comment from el twelve
that was beautifully written and surrounded by beauty in the font and picture. we do lose focus every now and then and thank goodness for redemption and the opportunity to change and go the right way
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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that was beautifully written and surrounded by beauty in the font and picture. we do lose focus every now and then and thank goodness for redemption and the opportunity to change and go the right way
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Yes you are so right, is it not wonderful that we can turn to a all loving God who forgives. Our human flesh will sin until the day he takes us home, and for that we need a lot of forgiveness at time. But we always need to strive and do the best we can to not yield ourselves back into temptation.
Take care.
Larry
Comment from nancyjam
good advice conveyed with
lovely rhyme and meter.
Your poem is gentle in its
reminders and flows smoothly.
Most enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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good advice conveyed with
lovely rhyme and meter.
Your poem is gentle in its
reminders and flows smoothly.
Most enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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I am so glad that you enjoy it, Thank you so much for taking the time to respond. Take care.
Larry
Comment from anele;)
Beautiful life and spiritual words to live by. Sometimes I find when people write about God, the words can be a bit intimidating...
Your words were perfectly selected and arranged in a way that I feel I can do that.Reminded me that it is good to take inventory every once in a while. Be grateful for all that is right in my life and recognize what is not.
Pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Beautiful life and spiritual words to live by. Sometimes I find when people write about God, the words can be a bit intimidating...
Your words were perfectly selected and arranged in a way that I feel I can do that.Reminded me that it is good to take inventory every once in a while. Be grateful for all that is right in my life and recognize what is not.
Pleasure to read.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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You are so welcome and I am glad you enjoyed it. I believe God was with me when I wrote it. I was going through and still am a bit some issues in my life that I had to have a wake up call on and I thank God got one. Take care.
Larry
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing about the way God sees us through each day and the way we should praise Him for what He did for us.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing about the way God sees us through each day and the way we should praise Him for what He did for us.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words I am so glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
Larry
Comment from Jvalle
This poem was very inspiring I too believe that if you put your life in the hands of god he will take care of all your problems.there was nothing bad with your choice of words and I love the way you rhymed .over all great job
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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This poem was very inspiring I too believe that if you put your life in the hands of god he will take care of all your problems.there was nothing bad with your choice of words and I love the way you rhymed .over all great job
Comment Written 19-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thanks you so much I am glad that you enjoyed it Take care.
larry
Comment from Paradox Tremors
The amazing thing, God is always there, waiting for us to ask for his help and guidance. He never turns his back on us, he loves us too much to do that. Enjoyed the write.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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The amazing thing, God is always there, waiting for us to ask for his help and guidance. He never turns his back on us, he loves us too much to do that. Enjoyed the write.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words I am glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
Larry
Comment from patmedium
Hear-hear! Aye! (Have you ever heard the chorus of agreement from our British House of Lords? I fully agree with you, friend. Beautifully presented. A good, clear message about the dangers of negativity. Pat.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Hear-hear! Aye! (Have you ever heard the chorus of agreement from our British House of Lords? I fully agree with you, friend. Beautifully presented. A good, clear message about the dangers of negativity. Pat.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your review of my poem I am glad you enjoy it.
And no I have never heard that chorus at all. Take care.
Larry
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A memorable piece. Pat.