Impartial Nature.
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Comment from Judian James
In such simplicity, you have stated the profound. The serenity that lies beneath, above and surrounding us, will always be there for all of us ... us without a clue as to just how monumental the message really is ... very smart piece, Pili
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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In such simplicity, you have stated the profound. The serenity that lies beneath, above and surrounding us, will always be there for all of us ... us without a clue as to just how monumental the message really is ... very smart piece, Pili
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much Judy.
Comment from Bryana
So many things can change
in this except nature, it
remains the same as the blue
sky, the moon and the stars.
Nature always impartial.
Excellent poem my dear friend,
it certainly makes us think.
Hugs.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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So many things can change
in this except nature, it
remains the same as the blue
sky, the moon and the stars.
Nature always impartial.
Excellent poem my dear friend,
it certainly makes us think.
Hugs.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much my friend . Hugs.
Comment from l.raven
This is so very well said.And so very true.Has a great flow to it.And your picture is perfect.And the line I like is.Hunger for power creates WEAPONS that produce FEAR,but diminish wisdom.Very well written.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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This is so very well said.And so very true.Has a great flow to it.And your picture is perfect.And the line I like is.Hunger for power creates WEAPONS that produce FEAR,but diminish wisdom.Very well written.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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I am so glad you like it, I love the line you chose. Thank you so very much.
Comment from misscookie
Like the artwork
It is perfect for your poem
I love how you express all the turmoil in the word yet the havens are still peaceful.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Like the artwork
It is perfect for your poem
I love how you express all the turmoil in the word yet the havens are still peaceful.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Thank you cookie for your lovely comment.
Comment from mermaids
I like the theme of nature being impartial to man's destruction. You wrote a poem with an excellent free verse style and created vivd imagery here.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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I like the theme of nature being impartial to man's destruction. You wrote a poem with an excellent free verse style and created vivd imagery here.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Thank you so very much for a great review!
Comment from RebelRose
This is so true. No matter what is going on here on Earth, the wars, wins and losses, chaos, etc, the stars, moon, sun and sky goes on just the same.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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This is so true. No matter what is going on here on Earth, the wars, wins and losses, chaos, etc, the stars, moon, sun and sky goes on just the same.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much RebelRose for your generous and meaningful review.
Comment from stephybs
A beautiful descriptive poem, full of wonderful thought and meaning. This poem is one showing great care with an insight to maker. Adorable!, Stephy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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A beautiful descriptive poem, full of wonderful thought and meaning. This poem is one showing great care with an insight to maker. Adorable!, Stephy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much Stephy, very meaningful comment.
Comment from Amanda Dcosta
This poem is so rich in meaning, message and imagery. It is full of depth, conveying more than mere human failing. I like the comparison or the imagery of the heavenly bodies going about their 'life' irrespective of what we do or go through here on earth.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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This poem is so rich in meaning, message and imagery. It is full of depth, conveying more than mere human failing. I like the comparison or the imagery of the heavenly bodies going about their 'life' irrespective of what we do or go through here on earth.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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What a terific comment! Thank you so very much!
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Hi! So good to find your work again.
The message throughout your lines is that peace reigns
where we want to find it, no matter the circumstances around us.
Thank you for sharing. Jewell
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Hi! So good to find your work again.
The message throughout your lines is that peace reigns
where we want to find it, no matter the circumstances around us.
Thank you for sharing. Jewell
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Hi Poet ! Great review , thank you so much.
Comment from words
Very well said.
I would prefer to join the heavens in their dancing and singing.
I especially liked:While blue sky, sun,
moon and stars
dance above,
impartial.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Very well said.
I would prefer to join the heavens in their dancing and singing.
I especially liked:While blue sky, sun,
moon and stars
dance above,
impartial.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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LOL love your comment, thank you so much words.