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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Harley's Ampeletum"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Patty,
You did a great job with this difficult style. Your words were fun to read. Harley seems like a special puppy for sure. The picture is so cute. Your lines flow smoothly, the repeating lines work well, & the topic is clear. Puppies are special. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Patty,
You did a great job with this difficult style. Your words were fun to read. Harley seems like a special puppy for sure. The picture is so cute. Your lines flow smoothly, the repeating lines work well, & the topic is clear. Puppies are special. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Hi Jan; thank you so much for going back and reading this poem. It indeed was written about a very special little dog. Harley was a great dog.
~patty~
Comment from Paradox Tremors
He's so cut, and ain't so amazing how much love and happiness such a small creature can bring into our lives. A beautiful picture. Enjoyed the thoughts you wrote out.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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He's so cut, and ain't so amazing how much love and happiness such a small creature can bring into our lives. A beautiful picture. Enjoyed the thoughts you wrote out.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading my latest pet poem. Harley is the dog I waited over ten years to get. I knew this breed needed LOTS of attention, so now that I'm semi-retired, he gets all the attention he needs, and I have a great companion. Your generous review and kind remarks make me smile. ~patty~
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Oh, Mustangpatty:
Hope you have lots of time to spend with ole
Harley as Jack Russells tend to get a little
ornery when they have to spend too much time
away from their master -- they are highly
intelligent, however, and make great pets
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Oh, Mustangpatty:
Hope you have lots of time to spend with ole
Harley as Jack Russells tend to get a little
ornery when they have to spend too much time
away from their master -- they are highly
intelligent, however, and make great pets
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading my latest pet poem. Harley is the dog I waited over ten years to get. I knew this breed needed LOTS of attention, so now that I'm semi-retired, he gets all the attention he needs, and I have a great companion. Your generous review and kind remarks make me smile. ~patty~
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Cute poem.
I like the form of poetry.
Flows well.
Is interesting.
Cute puppy.
Nice photo and visual presentation.
I like your last 2 stanzas the best.
Kathryn
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Cute poem.
I like the form of poetry.
Flows well.
Is interesting.
Cute puppy.
Nice photo and visual presentation.
I like your last 2 stanzas the best.
Kathryn
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading my latest pet poem. Harley is the dog I waited over ten years to get. I knew this breed needed LOTS of attention, so now that I'm semi-retired, he gets all the attention he needs, and I have a great companion. Your generous review and kind remarks make me smile. ~patty~
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Patty, you're welcome.
Comment from InHisownwrite
A great poem about your puppy Harley.....
Puppy barks nips and fun.....
Little teeth leave their mark...
Singing a puppy song...... Love it!
And how can you not love the picture..
Bryan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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A great poem about your puppy Harley.....
Puppy barks nips and fun.....
Little teeth leave their mark...
Singing a puppy song...... Love it!
And how can you not love the picture..
Bryan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading my latest pet poem. Harley is the dog I waited over ten years to get. I knew this breed needed LOTS of attention, so now that I'm semi-retired, he gets all the attention he needs, and I have a great companion. Your generous review and kind remarks make me smile. ~patty~
Comment from ameen786
Your love and admiration for pets is pouring in your composition. Just the fact that you write about your pet is admirable and reflects your true passion for them. I say Harley is one lucky dude to have you.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Your love and admiration for pets is pouring in your composition. Just the fact that you write about your pet is admirable and reflects your true passion for them. I say Harley is one lucky dude to have you.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading my latest pet poem. Harley is the dog I waited over ten years to get. I knew this breed needed LOTS of attention, so now that I'm semi-retired, he gets all the attention he needs, and I have a great companion. Your generous review and kind remarks make me smile. ~patty~
Comment from Minglement
What a fun theme for a book, appreciated I'm sure by all us pet lovers. Harley sounds like a typical fun-loving puppy and this is a nice tribute to your 'man's best friend'. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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What a fun theme for a book, appreciated I'm sure by all us pet lovers. Harley sounds like a typical fun-loving puppy and this is a nice tribute to your 'man's best friend'. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
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You're moste welcome. Enjoy Harley! Marcia
Comment from tango494
How sweet and simple and full of joy and love, this poem was a delight to read. Having three children pets have become a normal part of my life as well, and I can oh so relate to this poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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How sweet and simple and full of joy and love, this poem was a delight to read. Having three children pets have become a normal part of my life as well, and I can oh so relate to this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from Dklrdmcches
Another cute piece from your talented pen. The flow was upbeat and enjoyable and the tone was fun and loving which made this an enjoyable read. Best of luck to you and your writing...dklrd
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Another cute piece from your talented pen. The flow was upbeat and enjoyable and the tone was fun and loving which made this an enjoyable read. Best of luck to you and your writing...dklrd
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from mushroom
I enjoyed your poem about your dog, it is fun and so tells all the things that a puppy gets up to, a very good and easy to read piece, good work
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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I enjoyed your poem about your dog, it is fun and so tells all the things that a puppy gets up to, a very good and easy to read piece, good work
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~