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Comment from starkat
delightful poem that has the magician's skill of misdirection, painting pictures with words ...and, of course you were talking about ice cream, and ice cream cones all along... ha,ha...very clever and congratulations on winning this contest with a lovely double-reversed cinquain with a half twist (your poem works even without the pictures)... yummy, and it makes me want to get some ice cream cones this summer... i like strawberry and neopolitan ice cream cones...
again, congratulations on winning this contest!
don't spend it all in one place ... :D
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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delightful poem that has the magician's skill of misdirection, painting pictures with words ...and, of course you were talking about ice cream, and ice cream cones all along... ha,ha...very clever and congratulations on winning this contest with a lovely double-reversed cinquain with a half twist (your poem works even without the pictures)... yummy, and it makes me want to get some ice cream cones this summer... i like strawberry and neopolitan ice cream cones...
again, congratulations on winning this contest!
don't spend it all in one place ... :D
Comment Written 06-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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hehe thanx kat! i like chocolate chip and chocolate chip cookie dough :)
Comment from Vladilynn
Bravo!!!! Congratulations SHelley!!! Yahoooo!! Ice cream!! Ice cream!! My gracious ice cream~ Hard cone...Hmmmm..!
Ice cream delightful dessert in bed
makes you moan and ehermmmm...
Love much,
Lynn:0)
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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Bravo!!!! Congratulations SHelley!!! Yahoooo!! Ice cream!! Ice cream!! My gracious ice cream~ Hard cone...Hmmmm..!
Ice cream delightful dessert in bed
makes you moan and ehermmmm...
Love much,
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 06-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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thanx again!! :-D
Comment from amada
Congratulations. Very good take on an innocent ice cream while my mind was well over the drippings of the other kind. Ha, the joke was on me. Very well done!
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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Congratulations. Very good take on an innocent ice cream while my mind was well over the drippings of the other kind. Ha, the joke was on me. Very well done!
Comment Written 06-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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LOL! thanx amada! :)
Comment from findingmyroom
Well, this is dual delight, as we all pull our minds out of the gutter. Great use of the artwork as a red herring, so to speak. Congrats on your contest win.
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Well, this is dual delight, as we all pull our minds out of the gutter. Great use of the artwork as a red herring, so to speak. Congrats on your contest win.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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hehe thank you so much! :-)
Comment from azwildrosa
what a great poem. contains strong sexual content.. ha! i love the play on words. the beginning pic as well as the ending.
as my hands wrap 'round your hard cone
you melt
i lick
your drippings make my hands sticky
this one is my favorite. thanks again for sharing and congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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what a great poem. contains strong sexual content.. ha! i love the play on words. the beginning pic as well as the ending.
as my hands wrap 'round your hard cone
you melt
i lick
your drippings make my hands sticky
this one is my favorite. thanks again for sharing and congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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hehehe thankyathankya :)
Comment from G.B. Smith
Damn if you didn't have me right to the end. I love an intreguing poem or story. This worked well. It was very visual, and stirred erotic thoughts
Bear
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Damn if you didn't have me right to the end. I love an intreguing poem or story. This worked well. It was very visual, and stirred erotic thoughts
Bear
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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hehe thank you bear :-)
Comment from wierdgrace
this is so excellent, and so emotional in the way you wrote it, I loved it and felt the images and how strong they are, no errors and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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this is so excellent, and so emotional in the way you wrote it, I loved it and felt the images and how strong they are, no errors and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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thank you grace :)
Comment from fairydancer
Good double meanings in this poem. If you have a dirty mind (which I guess I must then! LOL) it could be very rude, or it could simply be about eating icecream - very clever!
Nicely conveyed :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Good double meanings in this poem. If you have a dirty mind (which I guess I must then! LOL) it could be very rude, or it could simply be about eating icecream - very clever!
Nicely conveyed :)
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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hehe thank you :)
Comment from Soledadpaz
Love this. You depict this with such delicacy, pun intending. I bookcased it. I liked it that much. The artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Love this. You depict this with such delicacy, pun intending. I bookcased it. I liked it that much. The artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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cool! thanx lots! :-)
Comment from Krugerrand
LMAO! Now where is that paper bag? I think I'm hyperventilating!
Syllable count is right on. Clearly a strong sexual current through out. And ending it with ice cream...and the picture...well, um...where's that paper bag?!?!
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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LMAO! Now where is that paper bag? I think I'm hyperventilating!
Syllable count is right on. Clearly a strong sexual current through out. And ending it with ice cream...and the picture...well, um...where's that paper bag?!?!
Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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hehehe thankya lots and don't forget to vote! :-)