Comment from Isaiah Ramesses

Excellent

This story is a deserving winner. Very faithful, and thought provoking piece. Well written and quite entertaining.
Good job.

Isaiah Ramesses

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2010

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Isaiahm

Thank you so much for the kind review. Carol

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

If only we all had that kind of understanding afforded us each day. I love this, and will look for those small signs too. Great job.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

Joy,

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Appreciate it as always. Smiles, Carol

Comment from patmedium

Excellent

You might of won, Missus... but you cheated! THIS is a true story, isn't it? No imagination involved at all, none whatsoever! ... However, I will keep your secret, Carol!!! Congratulations on being a worthy winner, dear.
I have read this wee one with a broad smile and GREAT pleasure. Pat.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

Pat...

Thanks...Carol

reply by patmedium on 30-Mar-2010

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Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

This is very beautiful. You deserve the laurel you got for winning that contest. I marvel at your ability to create such a meaningful story in 100 words. kudos

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

Perp,

Thank you so much for the kind and generous review. Smiles, Carol

Comment from Sharkey

Excellent

A beautiful scene created with just a few simple words. Touching and beautiful are the words that come to mind first, and also inspiring, I really enjoy your work.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

Sharkey,

Thank you so much for the generous comments. Carol

Comment from zuluruby

Excellent

A good piece, imparting all the relevance succinctly. Sounds like the voice of experience to me. Sad, if that's the case, but inspiring and uplifting. Congrats on the win, very worthy.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

zuluruby

Thanks so much for the kind and generous review. Smiles, Carol

Comment from medicnate

Excellent

Great job with this flash fiction piece. You manage to tell an entire story within a few short words. It's very heartfelt and tugs at those strings gently. Nice work here.

~medicnate~

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

medicnate

Thanks for reading and commenting. Appreciate very much..Carol

Comment from amada

Excellent

Congratulations in winning the first prize in this the 100 words marathon. Your story is complete, beginning, problem, and a miracle for an end. Inspirational!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

amada,

Thank youu so much for the kind comments. Carol

Comment from Belinda Amy Pantyboy

Exceptional

To write such a delightful piece of work in just 100 words is incredible. Stories like this always catch my attention. You have told an amazing story which melted my heart. Yes you can have six stars for this as you deserve it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010

THANK YOU SO MUCH.....

Can't thank you enough for the kind comments and the wonderful dusting of stars. Smiles to you, Carol

Comment from Nicki_Mist

Excellent

Congrats on your winning the contest and on the awards. A lovely and sad poem with a beautiful ending.The flow was great too. Keep on writing like this for you have the talent.
Nicole

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010

Nicole,

Your words brightened my morning...thank you so much. Smiles to you, Carol