Unidentified Flying Object
If there's life on other planets . . .48 total reviews
Comment from Alexander3571
Superb story Jani! Loved how this flowed and the surprise at the end was stellar! Been away from Fanstory for quite awhile but I've been watching from afar! Maybe we should collaborate some time. X-ray gave me a good idea with that contest he had awhile back with that multi-author book World of Powys. I would love to do something similar with you. Take Care and God be with you.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Superb story Jani! Loved how this flowed and the surprise at the end was stellar! Been away from Fanstory for quite awhile but I've been watching from afar! Maybe we should collaborate some time. X-ray gave me a good idea with that contest he had awhile back with that multi-author book World of Powys. I would love to do something similar with you. Take Care and God be with you.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for the six stars. :-) So glad you enjoyed reading this! :-)
Jani
Comment from RebelRose
This is a new twist on science fiction but a very interesting one. I like the way you introduced Christ into the story. Great job.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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This is a new twist on science fiction but a very interesting one. I like the way you introduced Christ into the story. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Your story is amazing and very creative. The actions and descriptions are great. It was my pleasure to read this.
It gives me something to think over during the course of the day.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Your story is amazing and very creative. The actions and descriptions are great. It was my pleasure to read this.
It gives me something to think over during the course of the day.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
Comment from BPL76
as a Christian Fiction story it had me thinking
The story flowed well
The dialog works well here too
Good Job .............
BPL
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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as a Christian Fiction story it had me thinking
The story flowed well
The dialog works well here too
Good Job .............
BPL
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
Comment from anabellapongasi
This is a wonderful fiction obviously inspired by your deep faith in the Savior Jesus Christ. It reminded me at first of the "Left Behind" series as I thought your story was about the rapture. But then it turned out as a fresh new idea: aliens or other humanlike beings in another planet knowing the Savior! I love it! Very creative. Nicely done.
God bless you.
Anabelle
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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This is a wonderful fiction obviously inspired by your deep faith in the Savior Jesus Christ. It reminded me at first of the "Left Behind" series as I thought your story was about the rapture. But then it turned out as a fresh new idea: aliens or other humanlike beings in another planet knowing the Savior! I love it! Very creative. Nicely done.
God bless you.
Anabelle
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
Comment from minopavlic
My rating is based on the creativity within your story. For the intended audience it is a captivating tale, which in itself would leave the reader with an inpact-ful message, which in essence is the basis of all writing
Well done
No_obstacle
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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My rating is based on the creativity within your story. For the intended audience it is a captivating tale, which in itself would leave the reader with an inpact-ful message, which in essence is the basis of all writing
Well done
No_obstacle
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very well written story with a "what if" theme. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. There is no logical reason for Earth to be the only planet with intelligent life.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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This is a very well written story with a "what if" theme. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. There is no logical reason for Earth to be the only planet with intelligent life.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
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You're welcome, Jani. Charlie
Comment from fayesh
A great story of hope and the possibilities beyond the stars that bind us as living beings. I like the optimism of the story. Wonderful if this fiction would some day become fact to us.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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A great story of hope and the possibilities beyond the stars that bind us as living beings. I like the optimism of the story. Wonderful if this fiction would some day become fact to us.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
Comment from fionageorge
I am pleased you cleaned out the attic. This is very well written, especially the dialogue. It really is appropriate language for the characters in your story. It moved the plot along just nicely, and the whole piece had a wonderful professional touch to it.
Warm Regards
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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I am pleased you cleaned out the attic. This is very well written, especially the dialogue. It really is appropriate language for the characters in your story. It moved the plot along just nicely, and the whole piece had a wonderful professional touch to it.
Warm Regards
Comment Written 06-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani
Comment from BethShelby
I thought this was a very good story. I was afraid the National Guard would be firing on them before they had a chance to find out if they were peaceful or not. I agree if there is life on other planets the God of the Universe is their God too.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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I thought this was a very good story. I was afraid the National Guard would be firing on them before they had a chance to find out if they were peaceful or not. I agree if there is life on other planets the God of the Universe is their God too.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jani