Comment from
Joyce L.
It is striking with it's sharp points and unique shape, beauty surrounds it. Nice choice of words. The count seems right for a haiku.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2009
Thanks, Joyce
I do appreciate your comments.
Comment from
Mariea
Hello Lynar. I like the idea of this flower, it's certainly different. Good structure and flow to this poem. Regards Mia
Comment Written 26-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2009