CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Opportunities"A collection of poetry
42 total reviews
Comment from Readywriter52
The picture goes well with the poem. There are always doors opening and closing. Hopefully when one door close, another one will open. We need only look for the key.
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The picture goes well with the poem. There are always doors opening and closing. Hopefully when one door close, another one will open. We need only look for the key.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
Comment from QuietMtnSunrise
This poem made me think about all those "doors" we go through (or don't go through) in life. Some slam shut, like you said, with finality...I liked that line. Good job with word choice and keeping within the parameters of the contest. Thought provoking.
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This poem made me think about all those "doors" we go through (or don't go through) in life. Some slam shut, like you said, with finality...I liked that line. Good job with word choice and keeping within the parameters of the contest. Thought provoking.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from fayesh
A nice use of the metaphor door to mean opportunities await. The only suggestion I do have is that you make the Naani impersonal and take out the "I", and use "Just".
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A nice use of the metaphor door to mean opportunities await. The only suggestion I do have is that you make the Naani impersonal and take out the "I", and use "Just".
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from Hitcher
Congratulations on the Clever Cleavage win, I'm thinking that you would of been extremely happy with that Sue, sorry! The naani is well crafted and the Hope is felt in your words, My wife has always said that it was my perseverance that won her heart over, that's another story for another day.
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Congratulations on the Clever Cleavage win, I'm thinking that you would of been extremely happy with that Sue, sorry! The naani is well crafted and the Hope is felt in your words, My wife has always said that it was my perseverance that won her heart over, that's another story for another day.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from Ragnar
My, you certainly are prolific. Again, very enjoyable, but I have one complaint...it's difficult to write a review that's longer than the poem, just kidding...keep writing, you do it well
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My, you certainly are prolific. Again, very enjoyable, but I have one complaint...it's difficult to write a review that's longer than the poem, just kidding...keep writing, you do it well
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from amada
This is a great metaphor for perseverance, never giving up and looking for other opportunities. The well deserved key to open new doors. Great job.
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This is a great metaphor for perseverance, never giving up and looking for other opportunities. The well deserved key to open new doors. Great job.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from Penya
I like this poem. I wish you good luck in your search for the key - don't worry, you probably put it down somewhere and if you stop looking for it it will eventually turn up =)
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I like this poem. I wish you good luck in your search for the key - don't worry, you probably put it down somewhere and if you stop looking for it it will eventually turn up =)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
This is so good. It tells us that other doors are always near. Your poem says not to give up. I like the message. You chose very good words. This is a great job!
Delora
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This is so good. It tells us that other doors are always near. Your poem says not to give up. I like the message. You chose very good words. This is a great job!
Delora
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from Minglement
What a beautiful presentation of your lovely naani poem for the contest. As always, you present a positive message, and offer hope. Well done! Good luck.
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What a beautiful presentation of your lovely naani poem for the contest. As always, you present a positive message, and offer hope. Well done! Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from bard owl
A lot of time is spent by human beings looking for the key to the door of happiness. Just about the only true factor in regaining that sweet illusive feeling is perserverance. That seems to accomplish more that talent and hope combined. Excellent contest entry. Best of luck to you. Blessings, Linda
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A lot of time is spent by human beings looking for the key to the door of happiness. Just about the only true factor in regaining that sweet illusive feeling is perserverance. That seems to accomplish more that talent and hope combined. Excellent contest entry. Best of luck to you. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
