Dancing on Air
Nature haiku 35323 total reviews
Comment from steevie
well done! Yes, snowflakes can represent many different types of objects and even people in some ways but you have discovered a new angle by which I had never thought about
both are light and delicate
super job
all the best in the contest
steve
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well done! Yes, snowflakes can represent many different types of objects and even people in some ways but you have discovered a new angle by which I had never thought about
both are light and delicate
super job
all the best in the contest
steve
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
This is a great presentation and unique to have author and artist one and the same; how cool!
Catchy title; good Haiku; should of been entered in a contest :-)
great work :-)
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This is a great presentation and unique to have author and artist one and the same; how cool!
Catchy title; good Haiku; should of been entered in a contest :-)
great work :-)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from joan marie
I like shape poems whether with words or symbols surrounding the words. They are fun and intricate. Great job. joan marie
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I like shape poems whether with words or symbols surrounding the words. They are fun and intricate. Great job. joan marie
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Jean Lutz
Delicate writing, delicate picture. The blue and white colors fit well also. I remember seeing Snow Ballerina on FanArt. Good luck with this entry.
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Delicate writing, delicate picture. The blue and white colors fit well also. I remember seeing Snow Ballerina on FanArt. Good luck with this entry.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from LadyBrendragon
The image of ballerinas dancing through the air with their tutus flashing around in such a flurry that it gives the impressions of snow. Nicely done.
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The image of ballerinas dancing through the air with their tutus flashing around in such a flurry that it gives the impressions of snow. Nicely done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from mermaids
very beautiful,ballet can be similar to snow flurries, good
analogy. Tutus do float or it seems that way and that makes them similar to snowflakes. Artwork is great as well.
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very beautiful,ballet can be similar to snow flurries, good
analogy. Tutus do float or it seems that way and that makes them similar to snowflakes. Artwork is great as well.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from mslyla216
Snow flurries, many of us experiencing them now, are definitely a part of nature. This is a marvelous topic for your haiku contest. The poem is strong enough to stand alone, but your addition of your poem in a shape from earlier, was genius. Very nice poem. mslyla
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Snow flurries, many of us experiencing them now, are definitely a part of nature. This is a marvelous topic for your haiku contest. The poem is strong enough to stand alone, but your addition of your poem in a shape from earlier, was genius. Very nice poem. mslyla
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi,
I hope you get a book plublished with your shape poems
You are so clever; a haiku written in a shape poem
Has Alvin reviewed your work yet?
Perfect Ballerina and haiku
Gert
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Hello Helvi,
I hope you get a book plublished with your shape poems
You are so clever; a haiku written in a shape poem
Has Alvin reviewed your work yet?
Perfect Ballerina and haiku
Gert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Minglement
Wow, this is a very imaginative and elaborate entry for the contest. I love the idea of snowflakes being ballerinas. Your previous shape poem is great, aslo. Good luck.
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Wow, this is a very imaginative and elaborate entry for the contest. I love the idea of snowflakes being ballerinas. Your previous shape poem is great, aslo. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
This is a terrific haiku poem. The message is complete within itself. Good job in sticking to the guidelines. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a terrific haiku poem. The message is complete within itself. Good job in sticking to the guidelines. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009