Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Jean Lutz
You have expressed the love of Christ and what should be the love of Christians so well. If only more shepherds told their congregations of this love, there would be less hurting in the world today. My favorite line is "One cannot lift burdens while their heart is wrapped in chains". Your artwork is beautiful.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2009
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You have expressed the love of Christ and what should be the love of Christians so well. If only more shepherds told their congregations of this love, there would be less hurting in the world today. My favorite line is "One cannot lift burdens while their heart is wrapped in chains". Your artwork is beautiful.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2009
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Hello Jean. Thank you for visiting and commenting on this old post. I am wondering how you came to find this one? I appreciate your thoughts and encouragement.
Comment from jeana
I loved your poem it is so true and has captured my own thoughts. It is strange how many people condemn others claiming their religous prowless. You have described my mother to a T. I tend to overlook her demeaning ways knowing that her judgement will be directed from above for all that she has incurred. It just doesn't seem to end does it? Your vivid images and decriptive passages have touch me. jeana
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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I loved your poem it is so true and has captured my own thoughts. It is strange how many people condemn others claiming their religous prowless. You have described my mother to a T. I tend to overlook her demeaning ways knowing that her judgement will be directed from above for all that she has incurred. It just doesn't seem to end does it? Your vivid images and decriptive passages have touch me. jeana
Comment Written 09-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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jeana, check out, "A Love Letter" for me ok? I'mso happy you liked this one.
We can so quickly turn around a judge a person for judging us wrongly because the root of rejection takes hold. Be careful. If the enemy can't get you upfront he'll getcha with the backlash! Hugs, Jewell
Comment from G.B. Smith
We can preach and preach our own manipulating sermons, but without love,all our works and every word will be as clanging brass.
My heart literally aches as I feel what the Holy Spirit feels and hear his still small voice crying out to us all.
I highly doubt that when we stand in line at the Judgement seat of Christ, we'll be pointing fingers any longer.
I surely don't want to be doing so, when my eternity is before me.
This gives the reader a fulle insight to the workings of your heart as you wrote this supreme poem.
You are loved by so many, and you can count me as one of them
Bear
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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We can preach and preach our own manipulating sermons, but without love,all our works and every word will be as clanging brass.
My heart literally aches as I feel what the Holy Spirit feels and hear his still small voice crying out to us all.
I highly doubt that when we stand in line at the Judgement seat of Christ, we'll be pointing fingers any longer.
I surely don't want to be doing so, when my eternity is before me.
This gives the reader a fulle insight to the workings of your heart as you wrote this supreme poem.
You are loved by so many, and you can count me as one of them
Bear
Comment Written 09-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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Glen I appreciate these stars and wonderful commetns so very much. THANK YOU! This one had it's day in the wrong perspective. I first wrote it pointing my fingers at those who have judged me saying "you you you" I felt convicted later and did a lot of editing. I'm happy you found this after the edits. I feel better about it now.
Comment from Kingsland
your poem speaks to the phrase
walk a mile in my shoes
you have written this piece with very good alliteration
it has an excellent message for all to read and adhere to
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this well written verse... John
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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your poem speaks to the phrase
walk a mile in my shoes
you have written this piece with very good alliteration
it has an excellent message for all to read and adhere to
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this well written verse... John
Comment Written 09-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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Thanks John. I appreciate your review!
Jewell
Comment from Diny
Ahhhhh dear dear Jewell- This was fantastic the best I have ever readof yours- to this date! I was so impressed by the way this seemed to flow so naturally and ryhme too- I can tell it was inspired... You did have a few places where your commas needed spaces before the next word - a small stupid nit I know- Write on Be open and let it flow dear one- hugs- Diana
My favorite line= One cannot lift burdens while their heart is wrapped in chains.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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Ahhhhh dear dear Jewell- This was fantastic the best I have ever readof yours- to this date! I was so impressed by the way this seemed to flow so naturally and ryhme too- I can tell it was inspired... You did have a few places where your commas needed spaces before the next word - a small stupid nit I know- Write on Be open and let it flow dear one- hugs- Diana
My favorite line= One cannot lift burdens while their heart is wrapped in chains.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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Oh Diny! Oh Diny! thank you dear one for the sixth star and the wonderful comments. Yes inspired indeed.
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There are people who pass through your life- and those who make an impression- You are one of the second- dearest- hugs- Di
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Aaawww! Thanks Diana. that means alot to me.
Comment from Jer4Clarity
Jewell,
Your words above and below are piercing and should be so. While the truth is intolerant is always wears the garment of love. Haughtiness is hatred. This is such a powerful phrase I hope everyone absorbs this truth.
~(;) Jer
Lover of Meanings
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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Jewell,
Your words above and below are piercing and should be so. While the truth is intolerant is always wears the garment of love. Haughtiness is hatred. This is such a powerful phrase I hope everyone absorbs this truth.
~(;) Jer
Lover of Meanings
Comment Written 08-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2007
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Hey I love your new name or is it another account? Thanks for the nice review. I appreciate your insightful review.
I have a confession though, I wrote this while three fingers pointed back at me and I had to edit a bit, to remove all the YOU YOU YOU lines and include myself.
I woke feeling convicted and came back to edit. Did you see it prior to now?
Hugs, J~
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No but that is what I admire so much about you jewell. Is you remain ever so humble before the Lord. I sense it in your spirit and wish I could meet you some day to the the brightness of the Lord shining in and through you.
~(;) Jer
Lover of Meanings
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Ahh Jer. Thanks! The second I think I'm humble, God shakes me some more. We are continually refining are't we?
Arrange for me to come speak and sing at your church...then we can meet! LOL ;-)
Comment from Oatmeal
VisionaryPoet,
I read your poem and your notes. I hope that no one is pointing the finger at judgement day because we have no right! I, for one, take full blame for any wrong choice that i have made. I give love whenever I can.
I messed up yesterday. I bought a large ruby ring for a friend because he told me that he could not afford one. I truly feel that he pawned uit and that his wife does not know about it. I want to call her and tell her that we had sex to get him back but we did not. It is just evil thoughts and I am sorry for my mistake. I was only trying to help. honestly.
The flow here is smooth. Your feelings are well described. You did a wonderful job.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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VisionaryPoet,
I read your poem and your notes. I hope that no one is pointing the finger at judgement day because we have no right! I, for one, take full blame for any wrong choice that i have made. I give love whenever I can.
I messed up yesterday. I bought a large ruby ring for a friend because he told me that he could not afford one. I truly feel that he pawned uit and that his wife does not know about it. I want to call her and tell her that we had sex to get him back but we did not. It is just evil thoughts and I am sorry for my mistake. I was only trying to help. honestly.
The flow here is smooth. Your feelings are well described. You did a wonderful job.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 08-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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thank you for the interesting review.
Comment from Janilou
Brilliant work, Jewell. I award this six-stars without hesistation. This is a message we all need to read, and if we think we don't, we'd better read it again and again!!
self righteous
self-righteous
Awesome work as usual. You are a wonderful writer for Him.
Jan
PS I am out with the goats on a regular basis, but only in body - I hope, not in spirit!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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Brilliant work, Jewell. I award this six-stars without hesistation. This is a message we all need to read, and if we think we don't, we'd better read it again and again!!
self righteous
self-righteous
Awesome work as usual. You are a wonderful writer for Him.
Jan
PS I am out with the goats on a regular basis, but only in body - I hope, not in spirit!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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It's so funny, I thought of you when I put the goats in there! LOL But no false judgement intended! Thanks so very much for the awesome six star review. I hope I hear from more people. I realized I must take out the Your-s and your-s or I'm doing wrong judging as well. Going to edit it a bit. Love ya J~
Comment from Paycojoe
Powerful piece my friend...your perspective is deep and powerful...judging others and not judging one's self can be trouble. Taking a look inward is always a good idea. It is like the saying about glass houses. It is really a well written, thought provoking piece and I truly enjoyed reading this my friend. Please keep writing and I will keep reading. You are very talented..take care...Paycojoe
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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Powerful piece my friend...your perspective is deep and powerful...judging others and not judging one's self can be trouble. Taking a look inward is always a good idea. It is like the saying about glass houses. It is really a well written, thought provoking piece and I truly enjoyed reading this my friend. Please keep writing and I will keep reading. You are very talented..take care...Paycojoe
Comment Written 07-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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Hi, thanks so much for this review. I can't believe it's had all these viewers but hardly any reviews.
Comment from Red Heart
When I criticize you
is it my mirror of within
I point my fingered judge
perhaps it was my sin
am I the jailer or an inmate
where does it all begin
the truth can be found
if we reveal the light of Him
he does not separate
but sees us all as kin
if we chose to give up our burdens
it is an end in which we all can win
Red Heart
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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When I criticize you
is it my mirror of within
I point my fingered judge
perhaps it was my sin
am I the jailer or an inmate
where does it all begin
the truth can be found
if we reveal the light of Him
he does not separate
but sees us all as kin
if we chose to give up our burdens
it is an end in which we all can win
Red Heart
Comment Written 07-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
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Hi Red. Thanks for the review.
