Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Diny
YEP_ DREAM ON!- those vacations are the best from reality and labels- judging and trival prejudices- beautiful jewell- with the 2L's loveling and languishing so very wonderfully- Hugs Di
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2008
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YEP_ DREAM ON!- those vacations are the best from reality and labels- judging and trival prejudices- beautiful jewell- with the 2L's loveling and languishing so very wonderfully- Hugs Di
Comment Written 12-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2008
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Hello girl ....howze your night going? LOL thanks for taking a look at this oldie.
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Well you have certainly made it not boring- haha Fridays and saturdays are usually very slow- No problemo- any others you want to point me in the direction of?
Comment from Veronica Grace
Thorny roses, a contradiction I would say.
What a vivid picture you paint for us in this walk of words.
From grandios to confusion to the truth of life.
Your last line kinda brings you back to reality. I like that.
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Thorny roses, a contradiction I would say.
What a vivid picture you paint for us in this walk of words.
From grandios to confusion to the truth of life.
Your last line kinda brings you back to reality. I like that.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2007
Comment from Dreamdancer
Big smile,
Me too! I would rather live within a dream then face reality-- lets go to toys r us and have some fun:-) Awesome write as always my friend... Dancing in Dreams
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2007
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Big smile,
Me too! I would rather live within a dream then face reality-- lets go to toys r us and have some fun:-) Awesome write as always my friend... Dancing in Dreams
Comment Written 03-Sep-2007
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2007
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ahhhh a toy store....now there's an idea. {[wink}}
Comment from Janilou
I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
How beautiful these words are to my heart tonight.
I love your work, Jewell. This is an outstanding poem but I have no six-star reviews left to give this month.
I love this poem. Thank you for sharing it.
Jan
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2007
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I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
How beautiful these words are to my heart tonight.
I love your work, Jewell. This is an outstanding poem but I have no six-star reviews left to give this month.
I love this poem. Thank you for sharing it.
Jan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2007
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Thank you so much for stopping in Jan. I always love hearing from you. I get so little reivews any more.
Comment from TrueBeliever
Wow this is deep Jewell. Sounds like many disappointments have come your way by thought of people. But I will say this my friend. Life and people are full of surprises. Some bad, but some good ones too! Good things come to those who wait. Beautiful job on this well written expression. Original thought and creatively displayed. Much love Sis, Ondra
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2007
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Wow this is deep Jewell. Sounds like many disappointments have come your way by thought of people. But I will say this my friend. Life and people are full of surprises. Some bad, but some good ones too! Good things come to those who wait. Beautiful job on this well written expression. Original thought and creatively displayed. Much love Sis, Ondra
Comment Written 30-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2007
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Thank you for your support Ondra
Comment from Red Heart
Despair would hide me
yet dreams will guide me
moon lights the path that blinds
thorns of knowledge
lead to petals replenished
by the cycling of a rose
hard to tame the wild flower
that roams the fields of fantasy
as its seeds the spirit with life
Red Heart
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Despair would hide me
yet dreams will guide me
moon lights the path that blinds
thorns of knowledge
lead to petals replenished
by the cycling of a rose
hard to tame the wild flower
that roams the fields of fantasy
as its seeds the spirit with life
Red Heart
Comment Written 29-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Thank you
Comment from Delhini
I think this is one my favs from u good friend. The soul that can create such magical words and express such powerful images I admire... Your soul full of beauty and pain...
D
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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I think this is one my favs from u good friend. The soul that can create such magical words and express such powerful images I admire... Your soul full of beauty and pain...
D
Comment Written 29-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Sometimes the best stuff comes from the painful lessons, eh?
Thank you so much for stopping by.
Comment from Margokatt
This is more abstract than usual Jewell, I really enjoyed it probably because it reflects a lot of my work in one. It has a great voice to it Jj. The flow is smooth and delicate and dark at times.
Ain't this the truth of the universe:
Toward my destiny
The finish line
Is only the beginning
well done. .off to find the parallel poem of yours. MK
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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This is more abstract than usual Jewell, I really enjoyed it probably because it reflects a lot of my work in one. It has a great voice to it Jj. The flow is smooth and delicate and dark at times.
Ain't this the truth of the universe:
Toward my destiny
The finish line
Is only the beginning
well done. .off to find the parallel poem of yours. MK
Comment Written 29-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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I like abstract sometimes. You should have seen 'his" reaction. He didn't get it. LOL
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Inner,
Well written, and deep. Food for our thoughts. Rhyme and flow are great. I especially liked......I'd rather pick wildflowers in a field of fantasies.
A pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. God bless, and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Hi Inner,
Well written, and deep. Food for our thoughts. Rhyme and flow are great. I especially liked......I'd rather pick wildflowers in a field of fantasies.
A pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. God bless, and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 28-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Thank you mtngalofnc
Comment from rivki1111
Beautifully published work with great imagery and careful word choices, I loved this poem. It is complex in its meanings also, very poetic. I thought it was about rising about the trials life throws at you, and overcoming them by enjoying life itself...hope that makes sense....dreaming. Nicely stated whatever its meaning and poetry says different things to each one, that is one of its beauties. bye for now, rebekah
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Beautifully published work with great imagery and careful word choices, I loved this poem. It is complex in its meanings also, very poetic. I thought it was about rising about the trials life throws at you, and overcoming them by enjoying life itself...hope that makes sense....dreaming. Nicely stated whatever its meaning and poetry says different things to each one, that is one of its beauties. bye for now, rebekah
Comment Written 28-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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You got it. I like it when you "Get it"