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Reflections For The New Day

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Comment from tecate
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You write as you live. As I know you, a person so full of love, but destined to try and share always this gift you have, even if many ignore your hand holding out your heart...Tecate

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2007
    Thanks tecate.
Comment from Shimmerbliss
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Wow - "No assumptions to blur
All that is beautiful
About the fullness of love "
I also love the lines -" It can be attained
And I have it
To give
No longer unrequited
I know love
Is in me "
Love is something we already have if we can get through all of our erroneous expectations.
:>

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2007
    You got that right Shimmer
Comment from fanlight
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Nicely written and presented - we all have so much love in us to give it's just a matter of how we give it and whom we choose to give it to - there are always the special ones - excellent verse - take care - Jean

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2007

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi Inner Sanctum, Yes I agree love is the necessary emotion that fulfills our hearts and keeps us going. You did a wonderful with your strong words showing us the meaning of love. ( nice if it was always real) not just a dream.
Thanks for sharing.
gert

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    Is love an emotion? I think it's a verb.
reply by Gert sherwood on 15-Feb-2007
    Hell Inner Sactum . read this-- the defention of Emotion--

    any specific feeling; any of various complex reactions with both mental and physical manifestations, as (((love,)) hate, fear, anger, etc.

    Great writing.
    gert

reply by Gert sherwood on 15-Feb-2007
    Hello Again Inner Sactumn, If you get a chance read mylatest poem (free verse) about emotions-

    "Sharing Emotions"
    it is posted and promoted.
    gert
Comment from 24chas
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I really like this one as well, Jewell. It's an appropriate poem for today, er, yesterday, I mean. By the way, love the new picture. ;)

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    Hey Charles, thank you.
Comment from Jerry1111
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That is an interesting thought, "love is a choice". There are many who would disagree but I am not among them. Your thoughts were presented very clearly and with good flow. I saw no editing mistakes and nothing to change.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    It took me a long time to understand that love is not emotion...Love is a verb.
reply by Jerry1111 on 15-Feb-2007
    There are many people, in my opinion, who never learn that love is a web.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    I know. No wonder the divorce rate is above 50%. :(
Comment from hooverpg
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Excellent- I loved the ending- if you don't love, you can not receive love.
I found nothing to change and I understand the over use of the word love- however; that is what this poem is about.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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Laughing at myself. As I was reading this the only two comments I really had in my mind where how beautiful the whole presentation was and that you really may have overused the word love, then I got to your notes and just laughed. Good writing, I'm glad you have found the one to give it to.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    Ha ha...You've trained me well, see? I just suck at the Da DUM stuff.
Comment from Diny
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And a sweet refrain you sing dear one- For love has a language known only to the pure in spirit Known only to those who give it away to return again multiplyed by thousands the gift you have does just that- write on I shall continue to compose my song as i think of you- Di

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    Thank you Diny.
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hi Jewell
You can never over use the word, love. Love is the strongest emotion in the universe. To be able to channel your heart and thoughts is a gift. You are still OK.
Bear

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2007

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2007
    Is love an emotion or a decision, Glen? Thank you for the review. I'm ok. (I think)
reply by G.B. Smith on 15-Feb-2007
    Jewell, I think it actually is a combination of each.  Love doesn't just happen.  It grows and is nurtured.  We make a choice as to whether we want to follow that path..............Glen Smith chapter 22 verses 19 & 20......LOL