Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Dawn To Dusk"25 total reviews
Comment from suresh kumar
Hi Jewell,
This is another example of your sheer creativity in imagery. Dawn is associated with hope and why should dusk be associated with despair? Dream, dream, nd enjoy the bliss of the night and take your journey on beautiful paths. There is another dawn tomorrow. Wonderful dear.
.suresh kumar.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2007
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Hi Jewell,
This is another example of your sheer creativity in imagery. Dawn is associated with hope and why should dusk be associated with despair? Dream, dream, nd enjoy the bliss of the night and take your journey on beautiful paths. There is another dawn tomorrow. Wonderful dear.
.suresh kumar.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2007
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I love your insightful reviews. You tend to review the content and don't grade for academics. I appreciate the heart felt words you share after reading my work.
Not that I don'[t want to write a good poem, but I get frustrated with the die hard perfectionists who can't let their hair down.
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I love your insightful reviews. You tend to review the content and don't grade for academics. I appreciate the heart felt words you share after reading my work.
Not that I don't want to write a good poem, but I get frustrated with the die hard perfectionists who can't let their hair down.
Comment from diane24
Jj,
a dawn by itself enough. A dusk the same.
But dawn to dusk.....how can one express it
any better than this? My soul is dancing. di
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2007
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Jj,
a dawn by itself enough. A dusk the same.
But dawn to dusk.....how can one express it
any better than this? My soul is dancing. di
Comment Written 23-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2007
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HI DI! Thanks you precious soul, you.
Comment from 24chas
Again, the ending is perfect, Jewell. Your words are even more beautiful than the picture of the lake. Great job of writing, my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2007
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Again, the ending is perfect, Jewell. Your words are even more beautiful than the picture of the lake. Great job of writing, my friend.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2007
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Thank you Charles.
Comment from Ronni
What a positively brilliant inspiration; so warmly and engagingly
conveyed! This piece keeps reverating though the senses, oh
so encouragingly! Deftly sounds like a subtle confirmation; a sense
of some preordained, mystic experience awaits us if we embrace
its anticipation; and bequeathed a sense of freedom, comfort and
direction, culminating in a kind of delirium of sudden, spinning
optimism. Thanks ...this is splendorous.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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What a positively brilliant inspiration; so warmly and engagingly
conveyed! This piece keeps reverating though the senses, oh
so encouragingly! Deftly sounds like a subtle confirmation; a sense
of some preordained, mystic experience awaits us if we embrace
its anticipation; and bequeathed a sense of freedom, comfort and
direction, culminating in a kind of delirium of sudden, spinning
optimism. Thanks ...this is splendorous.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Wowzie, girl. Your reviews are poetic in themselves.
Lest, I repeat myself. Thank you for the great treat.
Comment from Lady Jane
Very nice, jewell. I love how your poetry takes on many levels through metaphorical analogies. I am in awe of your talent. The imagery, the music this poem makes when it rolls off the tongue, and the presentation all make this piece a treasure. Thanks for sharing. Janelle
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Very nice, jewell. I love how your poetry takes on many levels through metaphorical analogies. I am in awe of your talent. The imagery, the music this poem makes when it rolls off the tongue, and the presentation all make this piece a treasure. Thanks for sharing. Janelle
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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hey, thanks Janelle.
Comment from PoesyPoet
Ah, some of the most wonderful things happen when the sun goes down. These thought flood my mind as I read this beauty. Good job.
Celeste
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Ah, some of the most wonderful things happen when the sun goes down. These thought flood my mind as I read this beauty. Good job.
Celeste
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Hi there. Thanks Celeste. Love your name.
Comment from tteach
This poem offers the readers a challenge: "Do you hesitate to enter?" Do you welcome each new day with eyes open. "Do not close your eyes / before you welcome / dancing clouds / in a moonlit sky." Such a powerful stanza!
The last stanza calls us to join in the celebration.
Well done.
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This poem offers the readers a challenge: "Do you hesitate to enter?" Do you welcome each new day with eyes open. "Do not close your eyes / before you welcome / dancing clouds / in a moonlit sky." Such a powerful stanza!
The last stanza calls us to join in the celebration.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
Comment from Lady Waukesha
The poetry I'm finding on this
Website is amazingly good.
I enjoy reading your work very much.
Keep up the great work—you have such a gift!
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The poetry I'm finding on this
Website is amazingly good.
I enjoy reading your work very much.
Keep up the great work—you have such a gift!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
Comment from volunteer angel
Beautiful picture you took Jewel. Your words to describe it "Do not close your eyes, before you welcome dancing clouds in a moonlit sky," show great imagery.
You wrote about a sunset and I wrote about A Walk In The Woodlands. We each have nature on our mind, and both show God's handiwork. Great job! V.A.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Beautiful picture you took Jewel. Your words to describe it "Do not close your eyes, before you welcome dancing clouds in a moonlit sky," show great imagery.
You wrote about a sunset and I wrote about A Walk In The Woodlands. We each have nature on our mind, and both show God's handiwork. Great job! V.A.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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OOOh I'll take a peek at your woodland piece!
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello Miss J,
such a hauntingly beautiful piece-- your words take the reader on a soul searching journey of the imagination-- another wonderful write my friend... Buddy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Hello Miss J,
such a hauntingly beautiful piece-- your words take the reader on a soul searching journey of the imagination-- another wonderful write my friend... Buddy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
