The Kirby Case - Part 9 - Final
We learn the fate of the serial killer23 total reviews
Comment from Lana Marie
Finally, he got what he deserved. Nice conclusion of your series. Writing a whole story through your rhyming art was like watching a detective show on the television or a soap opera where you wanted to continue to know what was happening next. I wonder what you'll do next what kind of story you'll write.
Happy Tuesday
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Finally, he got what he deserved. Nice conclusion of your series. Writing a whole story through your rhyming art was like watching a detective show on the television or a soap opera where you wanted to continue to know what was happening next. I wonder what you'll do next what kind of story you'll write.
Happy Tuesday
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Lana for a thoughtful and wonderful review
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Interesting post about the serial killer in the Kirby case. I'm interested in crime stories, movies, podcasts.
You covered the experience of prison life well. There's a power hierarchy from bottom to top inmates.
Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Interesting post about the serial killer in the Kirby case. I'm interested in crime stories, movies, podcasts.
You covered the experience of prison life well. There's a power hierarchy from bottom to top inmates.
Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Thank you, gypsy for your wonderful and thoughtful review
I hope you don't know about prison life from personal experience, like having relatives or friends there
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No, I don't know anybody in prison but I can imagine by the movies I watch.
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Yes, the body decays, the soul burns in hell, the suffering of lost loved one will always be felt all because of an evil deed. Glad it is solved. You did well with this. Thanks for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Yes, the body decays, the soul burns in hell, the suffering of lost loved one will always be felt all because of an evil deed. Glad it is solved. You did well with this. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you again Charles for another wonderful review and another generous rating
Comment from nomi338
And so it ends as most of us knew it would. Whether right or wrong, a case like this where proof of guilt is so strong, there is only one way it could have ever ended. Every inmate in that prison with a beloved female friend or relative would have demanded no less.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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And so it ends as most of us knew it would. Whether right or wrong, a case like this where proof of guilt is so strong, there is only one way it could have ever ended. Every inmate in that prison with a beloved female friend or relative would have demanded no less.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Hi nomi
Yes, a lot of serial killers have been killed in prison like Jeffrey Dahmer.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review and read my poem and to give me such a generous rating
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how your poem paints this gritty picture of prison life. The way you capture the secrecy around the murder is powerful. The ending is so powerful - it's almost haunting how the person is erased from existence. Your poem really kept me interested with its intense atmosphere. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed how your poem paints this gritty picture of prison life. The way you capture the secrecy around the murder is powerful. The ending is so powerful - it's almost haunting how the person is erased from existence. Your poem really kept me interested with its intense atmosphere. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Michael for your encouragement. However, I do not think I will do another anthology in crime drama. People lost interest, and there weren't a whole lot of views towards the end.
But I'm glad you liked it and followed it and I thank you for the wonderful review
Comment from Kayte Ray
Wow!! What a powerful piece.
I love the flow and the rhythm you employ here. Your stanzas read flawlessly. You have created quite a story here for the reader. You present images for the reader that everyone can relate to. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Wow!! What a powerful piece.
I love the flow and the rhythm you employ here. Your stanzas read flawlessly. You have created quite a story here for the reader. You present images for the reader that everyone can relate to. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Kayte For reading and reviewing my phone and for such a generous rating and generous comments in your review
Comment from Tim Margetts
Well, he certainly served life in jail, Pam.
although the life was cut somewhat shorter than the usual expected lifespan.
As were his victims.
He deserves no pity, remorse, or memorial to mark his grave.
A fitting end.
Tim x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Well, he certainly served life in jail, Pam.
although the life was cut somewhat shorter than the usual expected lifespan.
As were his victims.
He deserves no pity, remorse, or memorial to mark his grave.
A fitting end.
Tim x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Thank you Tim for your emotional and heartfelt review
Comment from Michele Harber
Would it be terrible of me to say this is the perfect ending, and I have no sympathy whatsoever for the man? I do suspect this would be prison justice, as any of the victims could as easily have been the other convicts' daughter/sister/niece.
I just read an article about how Sean Diddy Combs, who is accused of sex trafficking, is receiving hatred in prison, while Luigi Mangione, who killed the CEO of United Healthcare, is being treated like a hero, as many prisoners have felt they or their families were victimized by health insurance companies. Just one final indicator of how your story could have been a real news report. I'm sorry to see it end.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Would it be terrible of me to say this is the perfect ending, and I have no sympathy whatsoever for the man? I do suspect this would be prison justice, as any of the victims could as easily have been the other convicts' daughter/sister/niece.
I just read an article about how Sean Diddy Combs, who is accused of sex trafficking, is receiving hatred in prison, while Luigi Mangione, who killed the CEO of United Healthcare, is being treated like a hero, as many prisoners have felt they or their families were victimized by health insurance companies. Just one final indicator of how your story could have been a real news report. I'm sorry to see it end.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Michele for taking the time to review and read my poem and especially for giving me the generous rating with the extra star. Your reviews are always high-quality.
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You're very welcome, Pam. And thank you. I enjoy your responses as much as you enjoy my reviews.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This really was an EPIC poem! I've never seen one done quite like this and it was very intriguing from start to finish. I really enjoyed it. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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This really was an EPIC poem! I've never seen one done quite like this and it was very intriguing from start to finish. I really enjoyed it. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Thank you Marilyn for this beautiful review
Comment from forestport12
Truly had some powerful and memorable lines here. Loved the stanza that used Shanks/Ranks and the Pods/gods. You painted a vivid description of all that took place.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Truly had some powerful and memorable lines here. Loved the stanza that used Shanks/Ranks and the Pods/gods. You painted a vivid description of all that took place.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you again for such a generous rating and for taking the time to read and review my phone. Six stars!
