Why on Christmas Eve?
Things aren't always happy and bright.13 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I assume the prison transfer bus ran into the bus full of children. That the poor children had to be used in such a terrible way shows the former judge's depravity. Eleanor is going to have a busier night than she planned as she tries to keep Jenna and the baby save.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I assume the prison transfer bus ran into the bus full of children. That the poor children had to be used in such a terrible way shows the former judge's depravity. Eleanor is going to have a busier night than she planned as she tries to keep Jenna and the baby save.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Yes, Eleanor's troubles are just beginning as you will soon learn inthe new story. Thanks for reading and enjoying the shorts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
And so it begins. It's Christmas Eve and the drama, mystery, suspense, and evil, leading up to a new year, has begun. Doyle and Rossi are on the loose, with no rest for the weary. If Jenna can't do anything to protect herself and the baby, I hope she goes in hiding. Matthew and Eleanor won't be able to hover around her. I'm ready for what's next.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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And so it begins. It's Christmas Eve and the drama, mystery, suspense, and evil, leading up to a new year, has begun. Doyle and Rossi are on the loose, with no rest for the weary. If Jenna can't do anything to protect herself and the baby, I hope she goes in hiding. Matthew and Eleanor won't be able to hover around her. I'm ready for what's next.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Ready set go! It's here and I haven't even found time to thank you for the shorts. I so appreciate everything you read and write. Hope this new story line is just as good.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is another great story to do a segue back into the next book. You are keeping our memories fresh with these short stories. They are moving right along.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Carol,
This is another great story to do a segue back into the next book. You are keeping our memories fresh with these short stories. They are moving right along.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Just a thank you for every review and thought you have sent me this holiday season. I apologize for falling so far behind but I have read every review and appreciate it with all my heart. May the New Year be filled with love and blessings for you. Thank you with all my heart/
Smiles, Carol
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My friend you are so sweet. I wish the same for you. You did see the one where I am sending you a free subscription for Poets and writes.
You know I got your back sister always.
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You'll have to explain that to me...but right now I am so exhausted I am about to fall asleep on this lap top. My eyes are burning... Tomorrow, Sweetie!
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Ok, talk to you tomorrow, sweet dreams.
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Thanks...All reviews are final done....Now we can start again. LOL
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Go get some rest. I bet your eyes are foggy. Sweet dreams my friend.
Comment from Carol Clark2
You scared me silly with the noises on the porch and the rattling of the doorknob. It's good that Eleanor is there with Jenna, protecting her and the baby. With Doyle and Rossi having escaped, nobody is safe from their evil doings. Great chapter. Blessings. Carol
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You scared me silly with the noises on the porch and the rattling of the doorknob. It's good that Eleanor is there with Jenna, protecting her and the baby. With Doyle and Rossi having escaped, nobody is safe from their evil doings. Great chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I might have read these chapters in the wrong order but it doesn't matter because I've now got a very strong sense of the danger posed by these two offenders, Ross and Doyle. And, in particular, the danger posed to Eleanor's daughter, Jenna and her baby, Maggie. You skilfully built this scene up, Carol, with excellent tension and anticipation and I even found myself holding my breath. Thank you so much for sharing this intriguing story with Eleanor, already, very much coming into her own. Warm wishes Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I think I might have read these chapters in the wrong order but it doesn't matter because I've now got a very strong sense of the danger posed by these two offenders, Ross and Doyle. And, in particular, the danger posed to Eleanor's daughter, Jenna and her baby, Maggie. You skilfully built this scene up, Carol, with excellent tension and anticipation and I even found myself holding my breath. Thank you so much for sharing this intriguing story with Eleanor, already, very much coming into her own. Warm wishes Debbie
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Just a thank you for every review and thought you have sent me this holiday season. I apologize for falling so far behind but I have read every review and appreciate it with all my heart. May the New Year be filled with love and blessings for you. Thank you with all my heart/
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh...darn. I'm sad that orphans have been killed in what looks like an arranged crash to free the "bad guys" -- Can you bring them back as happy spirits? (Okay, so I am wishing a little too hard I guess)
This is full of action and mystery, and as addictive as all of your other "Eleanor" chapters.
I can't get enough of her!
Are you down south yet?
I hope you're warmer than I am!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Oh...darn. I'm sad that orphans have been killed in what looks like an arranged crash to free the "bad guys" -- Can you bring them back as happy spirits? (Okay, so I am wishing a little too hard I guess)
This is full of action and mystery, and as addictive as all of your other "Eleanor" chapters.
I can't get enough of her!
Are you down south yet?
I hope you're warmer than I am!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Just a thank you for every review and thought you have sent me this holiday season. I apologize for falling so far behind but I have read every review and appreciate it with all my heart. May the New Year be filled with love and blessings for you. Thank you with all my heart/
Smiles, Carol
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Stop torturing yourself! One thank you suffices for any and all reviewing I've done!
You must be exhausted!
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is another great chapter full of excitement! I can't wait for the next chapter now. I hope they catch those evil ones for good. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Carol, This is another great chapter full of excitement! I can't wait for the next chapter now. I hope they catch those evil ones for good. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Just a thank you for every review and thought you have sent me this holiday season. I apologize for falling so far behind but I have read every review and appreciate it with all my heart. May the New Year be filled with love and blessings for you. Thank you with all my heart/
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Well those masters of deception and with violent tendencies and predispositions are on the loose, and knowing John Doyle's propensity for revenge and mayhem, Jenna, Matthew and Margaret aren't safe, but mind you they've got one or two ghosts to help, well done, Carol, blessings Roy
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Well those masters of deception and with violent tendencies and predispositions are on the loose, and knowing John Doyle's propensity for revenge and mayhem, Jenna, Matthew and Margaret aren't safe, but mind you they've got one or two ghosts to help, well done, Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sorry I read these two out of order. I still understood what's going on. I can't wait to read more.
Jenna swallowed hard, her voice barely above a whisper. "What if they come back?" (whisper,)
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Sorry I read these two out of order. I still understood what's going on. I can't wait to read more.
Jenna swallowed hard, her voice barely above a whisper. "What if they come back?" (whisper,)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
Thank you once again for a very delightful story to listen to on this day before Christmas. Throughout the year, I have had the pleasure of reading many of your works and it has always been a delight. I wish you the very best with your writing this next year and may you find ya Has his hand on your life. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thank you once again for a very delightful story to listen to on this day before Christmas. Throughout the year, I have had the pleasure of reading many of your works and it has always been a delight. I wish you the very best with your writing this next year and may you find ya Has his hand on your life. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Just a thank you for every review and thought you have sent me this holiday season. I apologize for falling so far behind but I have read every review and appreciate it with all my heart. May the New Year be filled with love and blessings for you. Thank you with all my heart/
Smiles, Carol
