2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "If I can't See You"*
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
We put a lot of importance in what we can touch and see and feel. But even if we can't be with the ones we love, our hearts can be overflowing with love and keep close that way.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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We put a lot of importance in what we can touch and see and feel. But even if we can't be with the ones we love, our hearts can be overflowing with love and keep close that way.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister! You always understand my poems 💛
Love
Marival ❤️ 💙 💜 💖
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A passionate tanka verse beautifully presented and, essentially conveying the fact that the heart is the core of her love and nothing else matters in this overwhelming sensation. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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A passionate tanka verse beautifully presented and, essentially conveying the fact that the heart is the core of her love and nothing else matters in this overwhelming sensation. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
if i can't see you
you can't see me
LOL!
cool sensually romantic tanka
nice imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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if i can't see you
you can't see me
LOL!
cool sensually romantic tanka
nice imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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LoL. I get a little carried away with the drama. Is the Spanish poet in me.
Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Love, I believe is written on the heart, I too feel that it is more than what we can physically see or touch. I look at my brother who has been happily married for 51 years and my great aunt and great uncle who were married for 76 years, and it is definitely more than what our eyes perceive. Thank your for sharing this endearing and beautiful love poem
RJ
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Love, I believe is written on the heart, I too feel that it is more than what we can physically see or touch. I look at my brother who has been happily married for 51 years and my great aunt and great uncle who were married for 76 years, and it is definitely more than what our eyes perceive. Thank your for sharing this endearing and beautiful love poem
RJ
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Trina Layne
This was sweet. Congratulations on your poem. I am pretty sure if my partner told me this right now, I would fall in love with him all over. Blessings!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This was sweet. Congratulations on your poem. I am pretty sure if my partner told me this right now, I would fall in love with him all over. Blessings!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well worded and I enjoyed listening to it. I had a bit of a problem being able to see it because the contrast with the in the background is so faint that it's hard for people with vision problems.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This is very well worded and I enjoyed listening to it. I had a bit of a problem being able to see it because the contrast with the in the background is so faint that it's hard for people with vision problems.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊