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Not for prophet

A quatern

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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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This is a nice poem and a nice style of writing. I do not see it often, but I have seen it before. I had a lyrical bent to it. Enjoy the new week. Love to you and yours. Karen

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks Karen, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Dec-2024
    :-)
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Roy,
I don't object to making a profit for honest work, but there is a lot more to life than money, which though nice to have, is fleeting at best. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks Tom, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Interesting pun in your title, Roy. I think, however, you are a prophet, because you always speak forth God's words in your poems. I like the way you used the repeated line throughout. It fits well. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks Carol, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Carol Clark2 on 18-Dec-2024
    I always enjoy reading your poems. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    Thank you Carol
Comment from kahpot
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A wonderful quatern, your drop line is powerful and fits with ease in all stanzas, and the message of writing for oneself is excellent, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks Kahpot, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I am reading this for the second time, and get the sense that you are clearly saying the purpose of your writing is not for profit. I can truly understand this, and your words are well expressed. However, your title reads, "Not For Prophet', are you also saying here that you don't consider yourself a prophet of God or is thus a typo?
RJ

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks RJ, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by RJ Heritage on 18-Dec-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Angel Debbie
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Beautiful write, I too write in sunshine, sleet or rain and if anything comes of my writings, I have to give all the credit to Our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ for giving me this talent of writing. Super write my friend. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thanks Debbie, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am positive that you write because God prompts you to write to spread His message and you follow God's prompt. That's my version and I'm sticking to it. Thank you.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thanks Barbara, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Trina Layne
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Another gem. I appreciate your conviction in the work. This can be a real struggle - balancing gifts & talents and one's faithfulness to God. Sometimes, it's like if you have to trade one for the other. You use your gifts for the Master and let him add the blessings as he sees fit. You don't have to betray Him to profit in this life!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thanks Trina, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from jim vecchio
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Thank you for this beautiful quatern. Writing is a gift and God is the giver of ll good gifts, so we should write on, not for recognition, but because He allows us to.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thanks Jim, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by jim vecchio on 16-Dec-2024
    You are wonderful writer.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you
reply by jim vecchio on 17-Dec-2024
    My pleasure.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Roy,

This is an awesome poem. I like the repetitive versus. It makes the poem have a sing songy kind of flow. You always give the glory to God. He has truly blessed you my friend.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thanks Cecilia, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 16-Dec-2024
    You're welcome