BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Dad Rakes the Lawn"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
8 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Wow! This brings back wonderfully memories of my childhood. Dad was always careful no branches were in the piles. We would scatter them leaves to a flat pile, then help him rake them up for another round.
Thank you for sharing this beautifully crafted piece piece, Gypsy. I've enjoyed reading other chapters added to this book as well.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Wow! This brings back wonderfully memories of my childhood. Dad was always careful no branches were in the piles. We would scatter them leaves to a flat pile, then help him rake them up for another round.
Thank you for sharing this beautifully crafted piece piece, Gypsy. I've enjoyed reading other chapters added to this book as well.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve,
Gypsy
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from kahpot
Free patience lesson for the dad, maybe the daughter thought dad did it wrong Ha! I have read quite a few entries for your book, I hope it is going well, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Free patience lesson for the dad, maybe the daughter thought dad did it wrong Ha! I have read quite a few entries for your book, I hope it is going well, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym,
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. In parenting, there were so many patience lessons that I probably failed! Thanks for sharing this humorous little poem. I think as a grandparent, we have so much more patience!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Lol. In parenting, there were so many patience lessons that I probably failed! Thanks for sharing this humorous little poem. I think as a grandparent, we have so much more patience!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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LoL I am glad you like it. Thank you very much, Big Sister.
Love,
marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
I guess the lesson on patience being learned is by the father? The post fits the criteria very well and is very expressive of the intention.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I guess the lesson on patience being learned is by the father? The post fits the criteria very well and is very expressive of the intention.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------and it's so true, as a child the thins that interest you the him are miles apart and the line between needs to be done and will be done is more finely drawn!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------and it's so true, as a child the thins that interest you the him are miles apart and the line between needs to be done and will be done is more finely drawn!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
was never in to piles of leaves
was always scared of what could be
c r a w l i n g around within. . . LOL
anyway, a great leafy renga!
this book is really taking off!
cool fun imagery and picture
smooth flow with no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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was never in to piles of leaves
was always scared of what could be
c r a w l i n g around within. . . LOL
anyway, a great leafy renga!
this book is really taking off!
cool fun imagery and picture
smooth flow with no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I was afraid of insects under leaves and rocks but I checked anyways lol
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I couldn't help but smile as I read this poem. Two weeks ago, when we were facetiming with one of my sons and his family, he had raked the leaves. In their back yard they have a hill. The little girls to a big piece of cardboard and slid done the hill into the mound of leaves. They had so much fun. Thank you bringing back this memory.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I couldn't help but smile as I read this poem. Two weeks ago, when we were facetiming with one of my sons and his family, he had raked the leaves. In their back yard they have a hill. The little girls to a big piece of cardboard and slid done the hill into the mound of leaves. They had so much fun. Thank you bringing back this memory.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
I'm sure the people who join this book will enjoy writing it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish the best for all of those take part in telling the story. May you have a blessed day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I'm sure the people who join this book will enjoy writing it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish the best for all of those take part in telling the story. May you have a blessed day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊