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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Absolutely chilling, Jacob. So, the plot truly does thicken! Gavin and Ian are the same, and Oliver's brother. That's crazy!!

Gotta wonder who the other woman was in the car, maybe Mary? Anyway, we see that Oliver did have a wife who died, albeit after two years of marriage. He cared enough to have a vigil.

Still creepy he wants to get with a girl born at his compound.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Rhonda, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I'm pleased to read that Max has replied at last, although would question the reporting which should have been purely factual. I think, therefore, 'tragic' rather than 'horrific' (too emotive). Also, if the investigation is ongoing, they wouldn't need to say they believe it to have been a tragic accident (it would be too early to say). That said, an interesting development that the third person killed was Oliver's half-brother. It all gets murkier and murkier. Great, intriguing read! Thank you, Jacob. Debbie
...finished with Mary but couldn't (find) him.
The blood(')s still there on the carpet

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is certainly a strange turn of events. Her brother supposedly killed Oliver's half-brother as he supposedly killed their parents. That seems to make it even more unlikely that her brother did the deed as Ian seemed to have escaped his half-brother's clutches also.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The plot gets thicker and thicker, so Gavin, Oliver's half-brother is Ian who was killed at the same time as Danielle's parents. I do believe either Oliver or Jeremiah killed them. And it probably because they realized that this is a cult. Love the story.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

Another stellar chapter of your book. It's coming along nicely. I love how you leave your reader wanting more. Danielle is getting pretty deep. Not sure who Ian is, but it's pretty significant to Danielle.

Well done my friend.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 01-Dec-2024
    Jacob,

    You know I alway enjoy this book. Keep writing.

    Cecilia
Comment from BethShelby
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Something really interesting came from Max reply. I didn't really Danielle knew much about Ian. I she must have gotten picture of those her brother killed in order to recognize what he looked like. She probably saw him as a child but would she have remembered.
finished with Mary, but couldn't him. (couldn't find him.)

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
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Whoa! So...supposedly, Harvey murdered Oliver's half brother. If that's the case, why send Danielle into the lion's den? I'm thinking maybe there's a lot more to be said about this. Great job!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.