Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Chapter 27 B Willing Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from BethShelby
This was an excellent story. I think I missed one because I didn't know her mother knew he wanted to propose. I'll got back and read it. i"m glad she is going to be able to protect herself. I also glad he will be proposing soon.
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This was an excellent story. I think I missed one because I didn't know her mother knew he wanted to propose. I'll got back and read it. i"m glad she is going to be able to protect herself. I also glad he will be proposing soon.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. May you have a wonderful day and a very wonderful week. And happy Thanksgiving. Patricia.
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This is a nicely written chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. May you have a wonderful day and a very wonderful week. And happy Thanksgiving. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
I wish this chapter could last even longer. I will miss Noah and Sami when their tale is over. Not only that, but you made me hungry for roast duck. I'm having cold cuts. I'm rooting for Noah and Sami to come out of all this as a loving couple.
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I wish this chapter could last even longer. I will miss Noah and Sami when their tale is over. Not only that, but you made me hungry for roast duck. I'm having cold cuts. I'm rooting for Noah and Sami to come out of all this as a loving couple.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is truly a six-star chapter, as all of yours are! I can't wait for what happens next. This has been reading my favorite book ever on here by anybody. Thank you for this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Barbara, This is truly a six-star chapter, as all of yours are! I can't wait for what happens next. This has been reading my favorite book ever on here by anybody. Thank you for this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
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You are so welcome! It is all true my friend!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing! I must fill in what I've missed. I only found a typo in your description.
Sami learns she need to be more alert. (needs)
Interesting topic. :)
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Excellent writing! I must fill in what I've missed. I only found a typo in your description.
Sami learns she need to be more alert. (needs)
Interesting topic. :)
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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I will fix that immediately. Thank you for the catch.
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You're welcome. You help me too. 🙏
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Barbara,
This is a great story. It flows very nicely from start to finish. I think it's sweet that Noah is making Sami take lessons to for her protection. That's love
One small error:
"You'll see." He stood. "Laura, (we'll will) see you for Sunday dinner."
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Barbara,
This is a great story. It flows very nicely from start to finish. I think it's sweet that Noah is making Sami take lessons to for her protection. That's love
One small error:
"You'll see." He stood. "Laura, (we'll will) see you for Sunday dinner."
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I'm off to fix it.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Sankey
This was a very good chapter, especially the self-defence aspect. I wonder what you have for us after this story finishes? Here's that American extra, again! "You don't need to[o]."
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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This was a very good chapter, especially the self-defence aspect. I wonder what you have for us after this story finishes? Here's that American extra, again! "You don't need to[o]."
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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I have my next story almost finished. A little different. LOl Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, that was a great chapter. We're slowly getting there, where their engagement will be official. Only Sami seems to be ignorant of the fact, or so it appears. I might be wrong, of course. Until the next chapter. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Hi Barbara, that was a great chapter. We're slowly getting there, where their engagement will be official. Only Sami seems to be ignorant of the fact, or so it appears. I might be wrong, of course. Until the next chapter. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Sami doesn't fully understand everything.
Comment from lancellot
Well, I guess things are wrapping up, so certain things in the story have to come together, even if some were decided weeks ago??? But if the author likes it and the fan base, then go for it.
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I want to have the ring ready. Do you know her size?"
-What? Why would he think her father knows this? Mom, maybe, but not dad. Wouldn't a guy in 2024 or 23 simply take her to Jared's to pick out her own ring?
"We decided it should go to you because you spent the most time with Grandma Leya.
- Then why explain the tradition, if you're just going to break it?
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Well, I guess things are wrapping up, so certain things in the story have to come together, even if some were decided weeks ago??? But if the author likes it and the fan base, then go for it.
notes:
I want to have the ring ready. Do you know her size?"
-What? Why would he think her father knows this? Mom, maybe, but not dad. Wouldn't a guy in 2024 or 23 simply take her to Jared's to pick out her own ring?
"We decided it should go to you because you spent the most time with Grandma Leya.
- Then why explain the tradition, if you're just going to break it?
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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He's talking to her mother, about the size of the ring. No, some guys like to surprise their lady with the ring. I figured many readers would know the tradition and wonder how Sami got the ring. Thank you for the kind review.
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I see. Don't you think he is moving too fast? They really haven't properly dated or spent a week apart living and working like normal people.
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That's basically the reason for this entire chapter.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The chapter highlights Sami's personal growth as she commits to improving her vigilance.I'm also glad the bond between her and Noah has deepened. Despite their differences, they reaffirm their commitment to making their relationship work.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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The chapter highlights Sami's personal growth as she commits to improving her vigilance.I'm also glad the bond between her and Noah has deepened. Despite their differences, they reaffirm their commitment to making their relationship work.
Well done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.