Miracles
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Comment from karenina
You could not have packed more into this chapter of you tried! I'm exhausted and anxious reading it!
Jenna--no doctor and large for what she assumed her due date was...clever clue! She may not lose the baby after all.
Jessica! First reading letters from her ancestors and then injured in this intentional "hit"-- and Garth realizing the attraction to her is real!
Poor Eleanor.
Even as a " Golden-hearted" spirit she can't stop the living...only be there for them and pray.
Great chapter!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You could not have packed more into this chapter of you tried! I'm exhausted and anxious reading it!
Jenna--no doctor and large for what she assumed her due date was...clever clue! She may not lose the baby after all.
Jessica! First reading letters from her ancestors and then injured in this intentional "hit"-- and Garth realizing the attraction to her is real!
Poor Eleanor.
Even as a " Golden-hearted" spirit she can't stop the living...only be there for them and pray.
Great chapter!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Girl, I've got 236 reviews to answer but hurrah! the story is finished (tomorrow) and I believe it has been a hit with most of the readers. I see that you have spent your morning reading and I hope that it was an enjoyable time spent. Thank you so much!
I'm going to buzz through your reviews first because I am anxious to know what you think...
Love ya, Carol
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Listen... this is one of those times when I think it's totally appropriate to cut and paste a warm and courteous review... Many authors here do it, and there are only so many hours in the day!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
An emotional chapter to read in the second half and to write I would imagine. Garth's thought in regards to Rebecca - we've just started this story - worked well, Carol, I do think we have those intuitive messages. Loved it,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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An emotional chapter to read in the second half and to write I would imagine. Garth's thought in regards to Rebecca - we've just started this story - worked well, Carol, I do think we have those intuitive messages. Loved it,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much Valda. I am so far behind because I needed to finish the story before the deadline, but know that I appreciate all your time and your comments. Thank you for enjoying this chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
There is a lot happening herer. I'm glad Jenna and Rebecca. are alive. Garth is admitting to himself he really cares about Rebecca. Of course Eleanor would blame herself but Jenna refused to hear her out. I'm sure Garth has plans to end Rossi's life.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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There is a lot happening herer. I'm glad Jenna and Rebecca. are alive. Garth is admitting to himself he really cares about Rebecca. Of course Eleanor would blame herself but Jenna refused to hear her out. I'm sure Garth has plans to end Rossi's life.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Whew, a ton of action and emotional drama! I'm guessing from the tiny hint that Jenna looks more than 5 months pregnant that it may not be from the attack?
When Garth sees Eleanor after the girls leave, she does not mention seeing the SUV that followed them. I would think that'd be a higher concern for her to tell Garth than the apologies and such that they do talk about.
I saw no typos.
Great chapter!
Julie
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Whew, a ton of action and emotional drama! I'm guessing from the tiny hint that Jenna looks more than 5 months pregnant that it may not be from the attack?
When Garth sees Eleanor after the girls leave, she does not mention seeing the SUV that followed them. I would think that'd be a higher concern for her to tell Garth than the apologies and such that they do talk about.
I saw no typos.
Great chapter!
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Nothing is Eleanor's fault. She's trying to be everywhere, correcting every situation. Her and Danni are finding out more than anyone else. Eleanor found Matthew, had him transported to the hospital, fought with Bruiser and got him to leave Crystal alone, and started a bar fight so she could find out what was going on inside the bar. All Jenna had to do was take care of herself for the baby.
Oh what a tangled web you have woven. I'm seated on the edge of my chair wondering what's going to happen next.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Nothing is Eleanor's fault. She's trying to be everywhere, correcting every situation. Her and Danni are finding out more than anyone else. Eleanor found Matthew, had him transported to the hospital, fought with Bruiser and got him to leave Crystal alone, and started a bar fight so she could find out what was going on inside the bar. All Jenna had to do was take care of herself for the baby.
Oh what a tangled web you have woven. I'm seated on the edge of my chair wondering what's going to happen next.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, so much happens in this chapter! Poor Jenna and Rebecca -- I hope they survive, and the baby as well. At only five months, the baby will have a difficult time, and will be in NICU on machines for a long time. I hope the men find Rossi and his men. Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Wow, so much happens in this chapter! Poor Jenna and Rebecca -- I hope they survive, and the baby as well. At only five months, the baby will have a difficult time, and will be in NICU on machines for a long time. I hope the men find Rossi and his men. Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Things are certainly coming to a head. Rossi doesn't know what he has stirred up or how certain his fate now is. Hopefully the damage will extend all the way to Doyle and all those who aid his cause.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Things are certainly coming to a head. Rossi doesn't know what he has stirred up or how certain his fate now is. Hopefully the damage will extend all the way to Doyle and all those who aid his cause.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, at five months of gestation, it would take a miracle to save the baby! I think you should write for K-drama (have you watched Korean dramas?) They always use this plot technique of getting the characters to withhold information and then they get mad at each other and do things they regret. But I know you'll make it all work out fine.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Wow, at five months of gestation, it would take a miracle to save the baby! I think you should write for K-drama (have you watched Korean dramas?) They always use this plot technique of getting the characters to withhold information and then they get mad at each other and do things they regret. But I know you'll make it all work out fine.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Goodness, the action in this chapter - your mind must be racing! So many complications. Rossi is so evil - garth has to get on top of all this with Eleanor's help. Surely the baby will be saved, and jenna will discover that it is Matthew's baby, hopefully! Well done!!!
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Goodness, the action in this chapter - your mind must be racing! So many complications. Rossi is so evil - garth has to get on top of all this with Eleanor's help. Surely the baby will be saved, and jenna will discover that it is Matthew's baby, hopefully! Well done!!!
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Out of the frying pan into the fire were the thoughts that immediately came to mind, there's nothing it seems that can hold back fate, except God Himself He's the only one that knows the end from the beginning, it's either wholesale death and the devil himself wins again, or a great finish, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Out of the frying pan into the fire were the thoughts that immediately came to mind, there's nothing it seems that can hold back fate, except God Himself He's the only one that knows the end from the beginning, it's either wholesale death and the devil himself wins again, or a great finish, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
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Bless you