Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Miracles - Chap 20"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
19 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Things are getting more complicated aren't they. It amaxes me how you can work all this out Carol into such a gripping, edge of my seat drama. Well done. It's Tai Chi time for me now, I'll be back later to finish catching up.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Things are getting more complicated aren't they. It amaxes me how you can work all this out Carol into such a gripping, edge of my seat drama. Well done. It's Tai Chi time for me now, I'll be back later to finish catching up.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
So now the bad guys know where Matthew is and they plan to go aafter him even if it mean war. Garth was left out of the loop and he isn't happy. He though he had Rossi but he slipped through his fingers. Nice very active chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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So now the bad guys know where Matthew is and they plan to go aafter him even if it mean war. Garth was left out of the loop and he isn't happy. He though he had Rossi but he slipped through his fingers. Nice very active chapter.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
One has to be in awe of a character like Eleanor, who is a fun loving ghost who likes to play with her villains, and can be like the super heroe, the invisible man, who starred in film and boy's own mags, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Typo (Divito) residence. Devito?
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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One has to be in awe of a character like Eleanor, who is a fun loving ghost who likes to play with her villains, and can be like the super heroe, the invisible man, who starred in film and boy's own mags, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Typo (Divito) residence. Devito?
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Blessings
Comment from Ulla
Hehe, Eleanor is having a heck of a ball. Everyone is against everyone. I love it as much as she does. now the next question is, what the heck next,? Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Hehe, Eleanor is having a heck of a ball. Everyone is against everyone. I love it as much as she does. now the next question is, what the heck next,? Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Oh, Garth's not happy about being out of the loop, but it seems it's his own fault. This story just got more complicated, and Garth's men have taken down the wrong men. Lots of action in this good chapter! Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Oh, Garth's not happy about being out of the loop, but it seems it's his own fault. This story just got more complicated, and Garth's men have taken down the wrong men. Lots of action in this good chapter! Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
The action is exploding. Poor Donatelli is completely oblivious to everything swirling around him and all the moving parts activating.
Both of these edits are within conversation, so they can be okay if the speaker said it incorrectly. Just pointing them out in case that wasn't intentional:
over the crash site where they *drug* Donatelli's car out of the water.
(dragged)
Between you and I, it's not a threat.
(you and me. The objective pronoun-me- is always used following a preposition-between-.)
Julie
:-)
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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The action is exploding. Poor Donatelli is completely oblivious to everything swirling around him and all the moving parts activating.
Both of these edits are within conversation, so they can be okay if the speaker said it incorrectly. Just pointing them out in case that wasn't intentional:
over the crash site where they *drug* Donatelli's car out of the water.
(dragged)
Between you and I, it's not a threat.
(you and me. The objective pronoun-me- is always used following a preposition-between-.)
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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fixed.....
Thanks for the review and support. Just trying to get these 340 reviews caught up.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I love how you're continuing to keep the tension ticking up a notch, Carol, things really do seem to be getting dangerous for Matthew, I just hope Eleanor can remain one step ahead of the game. Another excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I love how you're continuing to keep the tension ticking up a notch, Carol, things really do seem to be getting dangerous for Matthew, I just hope Eleanor can remain one step ahead of the game. Another excellent chapter.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading another chapter and leaving your thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Another good one, Carol, and that tunnel was a surprise. But it sounds like we've got an even bigger battle than the bar room brawl ahead of us.
Great read!
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Another good one, Carol, and that tunnel was a surprise. But it sounds like we've got an even bigger battle than the bar room brawl ahead of us.
Great read!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading another chapter and leaving your thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Garth wouldn't ;isten to Eleanor but she did a good thing getting Matthew to Frank, and hopefully Frank's place will remain secure. So much action here, and twists and turns. A convenient hiding place fort he crooks! But maybe Eleanor will track them down. Fast paced chapter!
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Garth wouldn't ;isten to Eleanor but she did a good thing getting Matthew to Frank, and hopefully Frank's place will remain secure. So much action here, and twists and turns. A convenient hiding place fort he crooks! But maybe Eleanor will track them down. Fast paced chapter!
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading another chapter and leaving your thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Zowie....a jam-packed chapter with information overload! I had to read it a couple of times and all kinds of plotlines are starting to crisscross!
Eleanor needed to be in that tunnel! Ah she needs her share of ghostly hijinx!
I've got to get to the next chapter before I run out of breath!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Zowie....a jam-packed chapter with information overload! I had to read it a couple of times and all kinds of plotlines are starting to crisscross!
Eleanor needed to be in that tunnel! Ah she needs her share of ghostly hijinx!
I've got to get to the next chapter before I run out of breath!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading another chapter and leaving your thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol