Miracles
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I liked Eleanor helping Jason to help his son, before he gets in too deep. Joey was already thinking of ringing for backup, he just needed that nudge. And,
Go ELeanor.. Great read,
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I liked Eleanor helping Jason to help his son, before he gets in too deep. Joey was already thinking of ringing for backup, he just needed that nudge. And,
Go ELeanor.. Great read,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Love it. Lots of action, ghostly magic, and a great lesson in self-worth!
A couple comments:
He's acting like a rooster in a hen house.
(henhouse)
This crew *plays* dirty, and we're walking into their *playground*."
(Brilliant!)
His thoughts *are* interrupted by a voice, low and familiar.
(were)
Yet another great chapter churned out in record time. I'm only a little envious. Haha.
Julie
:-)
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Love it. Lots of action, ghostly magic, and a great lesson in self-worth!
A couple comments:
He's acting like a rooster in a hen house.
(henhouse)
This crew *plays* dirty, and we're walking into their *playground*."
(Brilliant!)
His thoughts *are* interrupted by a voice, low and familiar.
(were)
Yet another great chapter churned out in record time. I'm only a little envious. Haha.
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Fixed.....
Thanks as always. Appreciate the help and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Oh, I loved this, Carol. She, Eleanor that is, is getting her way with them all. I love the reactions of them all. The attack on Bruiser was priceless. Loved it. All best, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Oh, I loved this, Carol. She, Eleanor that is, is getting her way with them all. I love the reactions of them all. The attack on Bruiser was priceless. Loved it. All best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
What's up? Did Eleanor get a spirit promotion, what with her using superpowers--and rematerializing people now? Who knew that was in her bag of tricks!
I want to go to ghost school!
It seemed to do the trick, though...
I chuckled when Eleanor grabbed a branch and swing at Bruiser, hardening back to the baseball game.
You're smoooth, lady!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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What's up? Did Eleanor get a spirit promotion, what with her using superpowers--and rematerializing people now? Who knew that was in her bag of tricks!
I want to go to ghost school!
It seemed to do the trick, though...
I chuckled when Eleanor grabbed a branch and swing at Bruiser, hardening back to the baseball game.
You're smoooth, lady!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading another chapter and leaving your thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
I need an Eleanor sitting here answering all the reviews. My eyes are going crossed eyed. And my back is breaking.
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Cut and paste a little! We're all only human!
Comment from royowen
Ghosts, even petite determined one's can beat someone like bruiser, a no good loser and a brute of a man, fit only to lean on people, mostly smaller than him, but Danni steals Crystal away to safety, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Ghosts, even petite determined one's can beat someone like bruiser, a no good loser and a brute of a man, fit only to lean on people, mostly smaller than him, but Danni steals Crystal away to safety, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Danni wasn't going to back down but I think she was lucky when Eleanor joined her. She had a better chance of getting Crystal to safety. Thanks as always, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
These ghosts more than even the odds. Eleanor seems like she is everywhere at once. Has she cloned herself. lol I looks like Joeys Dad got his son straightened out with Eleanor's help.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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These ghosts more than even the odds. Eleanor seems like she is everywhere at once. Has she cloned herself. lol I looks like Joeys Dad got his son straightened out with Eleanor's help.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Yes, I like it when I can write in something where the parent shows the child (adult or not) that they still have a few things to share with them. thanks as always....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
It sounds like the crooks are being rounded up, and the only things left will be mending broken relationships and mending Donatelli. I believe you will finish this book in the next week, Carol!
Look forward to the next read.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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It sounds like the crooks are being rounded up, and the only things left will be mending broken relationships and mending Donatelli. I believe you will finish this book in the next week, Carol!
Look forward to the next read.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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There are still some surprises around the corner, and I'm not sure I can get them all in and have time to read, review, etc. I've given it a shot. Thanks for reading and enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
nice, it could be fun being a walking talking ghost, and I know a few people I would like to visit,lol Iwouldn't be mean or anything just mischievious
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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nice, it could be fun being a walking talking ghost, and I know a few people I would like to visit,lol Iwouldn't be mean or anything just mischievious
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
Yes, that was a brilliant way to end the chapter, Carol, I was really smiling as Eleanor emerged as I just knew that Bruiser wouldn't stand a chance against her. Another excellent, entertaining read, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Yes, that was a brilliant way to end the chapter, Carol, I was really smiling as Eleanor emerged as I just knew that Bruiser wouldn't stand a chance against her. Another excellent, entertaining read, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
How very handy and helpful Eleanor is. She's so scary because of all she can do while unseen. And she has helped Jason to change Joey's mind about his involvement. Great chapter!
Wendy
a row of Harley's (Harleys)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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How very handy and helpful Eleanor is. She's so scary because of all she can do while unseen. And she has helped Jason to change Joey's mind about his involvement. Great chapter!
Wendy
a row of Harley's (Harleys)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol