Ninja Bunny
Life of a baby rabbit22 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
How clever and lucky the bunny to escape the deadly chase of your Kratos who would stop at nothing to burying the poor bunny. I hope kratos recovered quickly from the hurt it suffered. Well done, dear Cecilia.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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How clever and lucky the bunny to escape the deadly chase of your Kratos who would stop at nothing to burying the poor bunny. I hope kratos recovered quickly from the hurt it suffered. Well done, dear Cecilia.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Esostine,
Thank you for the kind review. Kratos was fine.
Cecilia
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great poem about bunnies. Back in the day I lived in Suburban Virginia. We had problems with rabbits eating our garden. Then one day the rabbits were all gone. I went outside to get the paper and saw a strange looking dog. I realized it was not a dog but a coyote. That solved the mystery of the disappearance of the bunnies. BTW scientists now say there are two sub-species of coyotes - the traditional coyote and coydogs which are a hybrid of coyotes, feral dogs and wolves the Coydog has learned how to deal with humanity, including how to safely cross the road. Depending on the area coydogs are about 50 percent of the coyote population.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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great poem about bunnies. Back in the day I lived in Suburban Virginia. We had problems with rabbits eating our garden. Then one day the rabbits were all gone. I went outside to get the paper and saw a strange looking dog. I realized it was not a dog but a coyote. That solved the mystery of the disappearance of the bunnies. BTW scientists now say there are two sub-species of coyotes - the traditional coyote and coydogs which are a hybrid of coyotes, feral dogs and wolves the Coydog has learned how to deal with humanity, including how to safely cross the road. Depending on the area coydogs are about 50 percent of the coyote population.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Jake,
Thank you for the kind review. That is interesting about the coyote. I'm sure here in Texas we have our fair share of coydogs.
Cecilia
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nicely done. Rabbits eat our vegetables. When I grew lettuce I had to put up wire fencing. They starting hanging around the compost pile, and that was okay, I sure miss my garden. Happy torkey day. Karen
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Nicely done. Rabbits eat our vegetables. When I grew lettuce I had to put up wire fencing. They starting hanging around the compost pile, and that was okay, I sure miss my garden. Happy torkey day. Karen
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Karen,
Thank you for the kind review.
Cecilia
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Cecilia, so glad the rabbit was able to
escape Kratos...poor little think...
I had a Siamese cat once...he was sitting on
the front porch...a bird flew down low...and
he jumped off the porch and caught the bird in
med air...I took it to a forest preserve by us...
and they said they would take good care of it...
crazy circle of life...
I love your poem sweet girl...and so love the picture...
well written you...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Hi Cecilia, so glad the rabbit was able to
escape Kratos...poor little think...
I had a Siamese cat once...he was sitting on
the front porch...a bird flew down low...and
he jumped off the porch and caught the bird in
med air...I took it to a forest preserve by us...
and they said they would take good care of it...
crazy circle of life...
I love your poem sweet girl...and so love the picture...
well written you...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Linda,
Thank you for the wonderful review. When I was stationed in Hawaii I had a cat named Diablo. He used to climb the trees and kill the baby birds. One day I was out in the yard with him and the birds started dive bombing us. All because Diablo lived up to his name. He was a mean boy.
Cecilia
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that Siamese cat was crazy...
but he loved my son...
your so very welcome...always...
love ya...xxoo
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I was able to
visualize a bunny running and protecting his life by the author's words.
The poem flows and connects. The artwork compliments the words of
this poem. Thank you for the author's notes - great description!
Have a great Sunday!....Maria
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I was able to
visualize a bunny running and protecting his life by the author's words.
The poem flows and connects. The artwork compliments the words of
this poem. Thank you for the author's notes - great description!
Have a great Sunday!....Maria
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Maria,
Thank you for the kind review. We tried to get a picture of the bunny wedged against the wall and the grilling chest, but weren't able to.
Cecilia
Comment from CrystieCookie999
What a clever tanka story poem. I think this reminds me of a super update on the story of Peter Rabbit. Cute photo choice. I liked how the positioning of 'danger' and 'daily' help emphasize what the rabbit's life is really like.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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What a clever tanka story poem. I think this reminds me of a super update on the story of Peter Rabbit. Cute photo choice. I liked how the positioning of 'danger' and 'daily' help emphasize what the rabbit's life is really like.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
Cecilia
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's a lovely ninja poem, Cecilia, and I am so pleased the little bunny was clever enough to get away and live for another day. It would be best if it stayed with mum for a while!! Lol. Warmest hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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It's a lovely ninja poem, Cecilia, and I am so pleased the little bunny was clever enough to get away and live for another day. It would be best if it stayed with mum for a while!! Lol. Warmest hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. The little bunnies need to stay on the other side of the fence. Kratos gets his exercise chasing them. They always win though.
Cecilia
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I'm glad about that, Lol. My cat caught a baby rabbit once, it was years ago when my youngest son was about 6 years old. He chased our cat around the garden with a broom until it dropped the bunny. That was one very lucky bunny! Lol. He hasn't changed, he's 50 now! xx
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Sandra,
Those bunnies have to be smart to live. One day I was out mowing the lawn and I had to stop and pick up a dead rabbit. He had no head and I'm not sure what got him. He was and adult rabbit too.
Your son must be a nature lovers.
Cecilia
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He is, so are his children. It's nice. My mother always said if a child is kind to animals they will grow up to be fine adults. He did. xxx
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Sandra,
True story. Psycho and sociopaths hurt and kill animals. Just how they start.
Cecilia
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That's true. And it's so awful. 😥
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It is. It's like stupid people that use Pit Bulls to fight. They have no heart or are a closet psychopath.
Cecilia
Cecilia
Comment from mermaids
I enjoy the rabbits in my yard and your words show how a baby bunny is often smart enough to run from predators. Your words create a vivid picture of nature.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I enjoy the rabbits in my yard and your words show how a baby bunny is often smart enough to run from predators. Your words create a vivid picture of nature.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. The poor bunnies not only have Kratos chasing them, but Mr. Owl comes out at night for his snack. Survival of the fittest.
Cecilia
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good tanka.
-The opening lines set the scene.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good closing lines that
shows how animals like this one
always have to be on the lookout for danger.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good tanka.
-The opening lines set the scene.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good closing lines that
shows how animals like this one
always have to be on the lookout for danger.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Pam,
Thank you for the kind review. When I saw that little bunny with his feet braced against the wall. I thought what a great poem it would make.
Cecilia
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You are very welcome, Cecilia, and you did a great job with the poem.
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Thank you Pam I really appreciate that.
Cecilia
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You are welcome, Cecilia.
Comment from Sanku
Oh the bunny was brave and smart .Hope Kratos will never be able to catch him.He will try of course the bunny will get smarter and moree wiser. Good syllable count ..well done.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Oh the bunny was brave and smart .Hope Kratos will never be able to catch him.He will try of course the bunny will get smarter and moree wiser. Good syllable count ..well done.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Sanku,
Thank you for the kind review. Yes, the bunnies give Kratos lots of exercise. They normally have a head start on him so it's funny to watch.
Cecilia