Emotional Dawn
When confidence lost is found . . .26 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Effervescent offers two kinds of hope - full of enthusiasm for the future, and just plain bubble and giddy.
I listen to a dayspring rhapsody each morning when I have coffee on my back porch and listen as the critters and the breeze and the nearby ocean sing morn's song:-)
A lovely poem for this contest, and I wish you luck.
xo
Pam
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Effervescent offers two kinds of hope - full of enthusiasm for the future, and just plain bubble and giddy.
I listen to a dayspring rhapsody each morning when I have coffee on my back porch and listen as the critters and the breeze and the nearby ocean sing morn's song:-)
A lovely poem for this contest, and I wish you luck.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
Very powerful message within and I think we all at some stage or another in our lives may have felt this loss of confidence and the triumphant feeling on getting that back is amazing. Your choice of words are excellent to convey this. Well done and good luck
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Very powerful message within and I think we all at some stage or another in our lives may have felt this loss of confidence and the triumphant feeling on getting that back is amazing. Your choice of words are excellent to convey this. Well done and good luck
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
What glorious use of words to capture a moment.
The joy of a true wordsmith is to use uncommon words to illustrate a common theme.
Thank you for sharing this vision of dawn.
Tim x
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What glorious use of words to capture a moment.
The joy of a true wordsmith is to use uncommon words to illustrate a common theme.
Thank you for sharing this vision of dawn.
Tim x
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. A happy song definitely will inspire hope and longing. I like the words you used here like "Effervescent" and "rhapsody." The satori is right on.
I think this is a winner.
Excellent.
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Yes. A happy song definitely will inspire hope and longing. I like the words you used here like "Effervescent" and "rhapsody." The satori is right on.
I think this is a winner.
Excellent.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Rene Tyo
What a wonderful and I think, deliberate placement of words. To say so much, with so little. Very well done, this is a great poem in my opinion. The accompanying photo does the words justice. A rhapsody indeed!
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What a wonderful and I think, deliberate placement of words. To say so much, with so little. Very well done, this is a great poem in my opinion. The accompanying photo does the words justice. A rhapsody indeed!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. Making music out of the morning. How lovely. The picture you chose works very well for your poem's presentation. good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. Making music out of the morning. How lovely. The picture you chose works very well for your poem's presentation. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Yvette,
A lovely and hopeful 5-7-5 poem for the contest, my friend. Yes, I needed this as hope lifts me in the morning, and sustains me through the night.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
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Dear Yvette,
A lovely and hopeful 5-7-5 poem for the contest, my friend. Yes, I needed this as hope lifts me in the morning, and sustains me through the night.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Yvette.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line about hope.
-I also like the use of "genesis."
-A very good concluding line about
the "rhapsody" of dawn. It creates
a very good aha moment.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice image and presentation, Yvette.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line about hope.
-I also like the use of "genesis."
-A very good concluding line about
the "rhapsody" of dawn. It creates
a very good aha moment.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Yvette,
This is a inspiring poem of hope and and rebirth. I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
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Hi Yvette,
This is a inspiring poem of hope and and rebirth. I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Aussie
When youth recedes and age becomes our next stage of life, it is still an adventure. Blink and you will miss it.
I liked your poem, starting at Genesis and hearing the song of life with more wisdom and stability. K xx
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When youth recedes and age becomes our next stage of life, it is still an adventure. Blink and you will miss it.
I liked your poem, starting at Genesis and hearing the song of life with more wisdom and stability. K xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024