Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This free verse, I Wonder, stretches the personal touch to include the very elements that way cross the world and rustle the hair or caress the face of a particular others. Nice.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

One does wonder if a lost love still remembers the time one had with them. If they were together, it wasn't all bad there were good times too. I don't know. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, Barbara

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Comment from zanya

Excellent

The emotion is profound here and expresses longing for a distant lover, while at the same time echoing sentiments we all have experienced and still experience in our lives. Beautiful language.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, Zanya

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Fictional crushes are the best. No pressure and no guilt. Lol. This was a beautiful poem, Gypsy. I especially liked the line about the warm breeze caressing his face. Really good. Gretchen

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, Gretchen

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Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Perhaps he is writing or thinking similar thoughts! Lol. It's a beautiful poem and has wistful tones of memories of romance and special moments. Beautifully expressed.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, Wendy

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Comment from kahpot

Exceptional

Absolutely beautiful, words and feelings that one could get lost in, or chase and dream about, your first stanza is my favorite, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, for the exceptional six stars review!

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

I guess the trouble with someone else's sensations, we can never really know what they feel, it's like pain, we can never really stand in someone else's shoes, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much,

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reply by royowen on 21-Nov-2024

Welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I had to smile at your notes. You and MJ (Heather Knight) write about your faraway crushes! This one is very eloquently expressed and these sensations can make us wonder and intensify the longing.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. All I have left are crushes... it's safer that way lol

❤️ Marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

yea... nz is quite far lol!

a great free verse for a crush poem
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley

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Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Very ethereal and dreamy
poem, Gypsy Blue Rose.
Enchanting and romantic.
The artwork is hauntingly
beauteous. I hope your
Thursday morning dawns
inspirational. Blessings to
you.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, Regina

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