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Viewing comments for Chapter 105 "Her Oppressed Heart".
9 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....snd a powerful sta T ement of a truth not often thought of, the tragic result of man's presence. To be sure, there is ate cetainly forest fires caused by nature, but most are caused by man
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....snd a powerful sta T ement of a truth not often thought of, the tragic result of man's presence. To be sure, there is ate cetainly forest fires caused by nature, but most are caused by man
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Yes, unfortunately fires can separate so much and so many, and like many I tend to forget about the lost creatures and critters, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Yes, unfortunately fires can separate so much and so many, and like many I tend to forget about the lost creatures and critters, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
aww so sad how devastating forest fires are...
this was a great poem about it - didn't expect it to be about deer lol
one thing: the scorching fire threats to outrun her frantic race <-- i think this should be "threatENS"
other than that, excellent work with cool imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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aww so sad how devastating forest fires are...
this was a great poem about it - didn't expect it to be about deer lol
one thing: the scorching fire threats to outrun her frantic race <-- i think this should be "threatENS"
other than that, excellent work with cool imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you! I changed it.
Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
For those of us who grew up waaay back when... this one gives ya flashbacks to the original Bambi... Doesn't help that I've been through a residence fire and just the thought of what fire can do is truly chilling... well written, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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For those of us who grew up waaay back when... this one gives ya flashbacks to the original Bambi... Doesn't help that I've been through a residence fire and just the thought of what fire can do is truly chilling... well written, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Yes, I did think of Bambi though this is not about him.
Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I can only imagine what this doe feels after being separated by such burning flames. If ever you had the sad encounter of seeing animals after a forest burn, it is very troubling, emotional and heartbreaking. Your words speak of this sadness, and present it in a poetic, but tragic way.
RJ
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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I can only imagine what this doe feels after being separated by such burning flames. If ever you had the sad encounter of seeing animals after a forest burn, it is very troubling, emotional and heartbreaking. Your words speak of this sadness, and present it in a poetic, but tragic way.
RJ
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review 😊
Gypsy
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Well deserved. My pleasure
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This reminds me of the scene in Bambi where there's a forest fire. I remember as a child being so scared when I watched it. Unfortunately, forest fires are raging on both coasts in the US and I understand in some parts of South America and Europe. Your presentation and poem are wonderful.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This reminds me of the scene in Bambi where there's a forest fire. I remember as a child being so scared when I watched it. Unfortunately, forest fires are raging on both coasts in the US and I understand in some parts of South America and Europe. Your presentation and poem are wonderful.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem of love and devotion. The words are deep and poignant and paints the picture of how devastating fires can be, especially the wildlife. The picture is a great choice for the poem.
Great job.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This is a great poem of love and devotion. The words are deep and poignant and paints the picture of how devastating fires can be, especially the wildlife. The picture is a great choice for the poem.
Great job.
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is very dramatic and the more so because, right up until the end, the reader is unaware of exactly who/what the subject is. The imagery of fire and heat is beautifully done. And I particularly like: before death's touch/puts out her life's spark. Then the visual of the buck waiting is even more poignant. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This is very dramatic and the more so because, right up until the end, the reader is unaware of exactly who/what the subject is. The imagery of fire and heat is beautifully done. And I particularly like: before death's touch/puts out her life's spark. Then the visual of the buck waiting is even more poignant. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Spanish poets tend to be dramatic .... lol
Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
This makes me think of the fires in Camarillo as some of our church friends have family there. It also makes me think of the movie, Bambi. We certainly have interfered with natural forest life and we have so many environmental problems since.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This makes me think of the fires in Camarillo as some of our church friends have family there. It also makes me think of the movie, Bambi. We certainly have interfered with natural forest life and we have so many environmental problems since.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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I was thinking about Bambi but the poem is not about him.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️