Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, we have a cold moon. Last night our moon was so huge and beautiful. You always amaze me with your poetry and your presentations. You're so talented.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I really like the way your words combine nature and human feelings, to me these words are telling of someone who seems to be caught in the middle of a chance or decision, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wow, the moon is getting lots of attention! I went up to check the moon but missed the time when it was biggest this month. Thanks for sharing about he "Cold Moon" for next month! May we overflow with love and overcome the cold!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, big sister ❤️

Love

Marival ❤️

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

nice one! and i like the rhyme, too... great imagery of moon above and ocean below connection with one's soul bursting with love

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A fluent and rhyming tanka in which the chill of nature is reflected in a sense of solitude and aching loss of a lover perhaps. Beautifully presented. Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tanka, Cold Moon, has the proper formatting and finds the day has come when nature takes the kit gloves off and pulls on the winter gloves.......

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy