Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Miracles - Chap 10"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like how you emphasize the theme of control. I know people who have tv control remote controls really have a myth that they are in control. I like how you have the main character directing us so we will follow her.
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I like how you emphasize the theme of control. I know people who have tv control remote controls really have a myth that they are in control. I like how you have the main character directing us so we will follow her.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I hope the Judge is out in the cold sooner rather than later. You are swuirling these characters and their little stories around really well and combining them into a great read, Carol. Well done,
cheers,
valda,
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I hope the Judge is out in the cold sooner rather than later. You are swuirling these characters and their little stories around really well and combining them into a great read, Carol. Well done,
cheers,
valda,
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
And so the lightbulb began to flicker and glow... Geez, I'm slow! So Donatelli is at the property Rebecca has inherited? Nice tie-in, Carol! There's more to this whole Rebecca/adopted/twin thing than I can put my finger on right now. Luckily, I have the luxury and pleasure of settling in and enjoying you as you unravel the tale of many plots converging!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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And so the lightbulb began to flicker and glow... Geez, I'm slow! So Donatelli is at the property Rebecca has inherited? Nice tie-in, Carol! There's more to this whole Rebecca/adopted/twin thing than I can put my finger on right now. Luckily, I have the luxury and pleasure of settling in and enjoying you as you unravel the tale of many plots converging!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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I think you will see it unfold before I actually say it, because you are a born "detective" when sleuthing my stories. It's going to get complicated and we might have an explosion or two so hang on!
Smiles, Carol
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This is why I love your plots!
Comment from Wendy G
Yes Doyle will be left stranded if he falls out of favour with the others. That sounds like it fits the requirements of Rebecca's inheritance. They might find someone there! Well written!
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Yes Doyle will be left stranded if he falls out of favour with the others. That sounds like it fits the requirements of Rebecca's inheritance. They might find someone there! Well written!
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
So Donatelli is at the vineyard Rebecca's inherited, I think. All the threads you weave in and out of a tapestry of this story!
The Judge is truly repugnant. Him idolizing Tony Soprano is a good touch.
I was sucked in from the beginning. No idea if you had any typos because I was completely submerged in your story! (Lol, I didn't see any).
Nicely done!
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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So Donatelli is at the vineyard Rebecca's inherited, I think. All the threads you weave in and out of a tapestry of this story!
The Judge is truly repugnant. Him idolizing Tony Soprano is a good touch.
I was sucked in from the beginning. No idea if you had any typos because I was completely submerged in your story! (Lol, I didn't see any).
Nicely done!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
I absolutely love having my own private author! I just sit back in my chair and wait for you to fill my senses with entertainment, lol. Are any of your works published?
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I absolutely love having my own private author! I just sit back in my chair and wait for you to fill my senses with entertainment, lol. Are any of your works published?
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Your private author (wow! that's me!) is overwhelmed at the moment but I did want to thank you so much. My first book was published Friday... Read Dreams Do Come True on here and you'll be able to read about it. Thanks!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I would think our two ghost heroines would be able to zip to places and find Donatelli quicker than humans could.
You created a real monster in the Judge character. Hope he loses all the inside support he's getting in jail.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I would think our two ghost heroines would be able to zip to places and find Donatelli quicker than humans could.
You created a real monster in the Judge character. Hope he loses all the inside support he's getting in jail.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Eleanor is working on it with all her heart and Danni who asked to become visible is tied to a desk because Donatelli is missing. In the meantime she is researching Angela Giordano and will make some remarkable discoveries. And yes, the Judge is a monster...I'm not sure what his payback will be just yet but he deserves the worse.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
The thing I love about your characters is, they are larger than life itself, even the evil ones, like Doyle, but even Doyle is only a large fish in a small pond, he can be ruled by bigger fish, meanwhile Donatelli hasn't been found, and Rebecca's dilemma continues, well done Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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The thing I love about your characters is, they are larger than life itself, even the evil ones, like Doyle, but even Doyle is only a large fish in a small pond, he can be ruled by bigger fish, meanwhile Donatelli hasn't been found, and Rebecca's dilemma continues, well done Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I read this out of order. Sorry, I tend to do that, but both were easy to follow. I can't wait to read more. We are getting closer to putting the pieces together. This is another good read.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I read this out of order. Sorry, I tend to do that, but both were easy to follow. I can't wait to read more. We are getting closer to putting the pieces together. This is another good read.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
You're kind of like a confetti machine, always throwing out more, long as your motor is running, keeping us reading twisting and turning, grasping at clues. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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You're kind of like a confetti machine, always throwing out more, long as your motor is running, keeping us reading twisting and turning, grasping at clues. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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That's a good description of me right now...confetti! So much is happening I don't know which way I am going. I am traveling to North Carolina, (a feat for an old lady lol) and instantly was at my great granddaughters soccer tournament....and four people who I know love me....3 greats and a granddaughter. I am blessed.
Thanks for enjoying what I love - writing and sharing. Take care!
Smiles, Carol