2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 74 "I'm Bound"*
5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing a poem about the happy time of a love lost. I believe it's probably better to dwell on the happy times rather than dwell on the hurtful times. Your presentation and poem are wonderful.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for sharing a poem about the happy time of a love lost. I believe it's probably better to dwell on the happy times rather than dwell on the hurtful times. Your presentation and poem are wonderful.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Sometimes the "echoes" of those songs of love are even prettier than the reality in the past. The mind replays and idealizes and we forget the parts that were not so musical. Well said.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Sometimes the "echoes" of those songs of love are even prettier than the reality in the past. The mind replays and idealizes and we forget the parts that were not so musical. Well said.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Yes, that's true. Feeling sad today. Thank you big sister.
Love,
Marival ❤️
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Me, too. I keep telling myself to focus on the good and the lovely... Let's focus on Jesus. Philippians 4:8
"Finally, brothers, whatever is true, whatever is honorable, whatever is just, whatever is pure, whatever is lovely, whatever is commendable, if there is any excellence, if there is anything worthy of praise, think about these things".
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Yes, thank God. He was the best teacher
Comment from RJ Heritage
This to me is a type of nostalgic love. It is strong, but perhaps, build on memories. Thanks for sharing. Nicely written poem and expressed and presented well
RJ
RJ
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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This to me is a type of nostalgic love. It is strong, but perhaps, build on memories. Thanks for sharing. Nicely written poem and expressed and presented well
RJ
RJ
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the winds of change line in blue - somehow it fits very well
nice imagery holding on the the echoes of songs
cool butterfly splash pic, too
an excellent tanka with great feeling
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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i like the winds of change line in blue - somehow it fits very well
nice imagery holding on the the echoes of songs
cool butterfly splash pic, too
an excellent tanka with great feeling
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This seems to be suggestive of being powerless in the forces of nature - bound, caught and holding on whilst swept away on a current of lost love. Evocative and haunting. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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This seems to be suggestive of being powerless in the forces of nature - bound, caught and holding on whilst swept away on a current of lost love. Evocative and haunting. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 😊