Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Miracles - Chap 6"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
10 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I wondered if the baby could be Donatelli's, or the rapist's. Things are heating up between Donatelli and Garth - once more, and the beating D has had is not looking good for him. The judge certainly wields a lot of power. Impressive and dramatic chapter!
Wendy
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I wondered if the baby could be Donatelli's, or the rapist's. Things are heating up between Donatelli and Garth - once more, and the beating D has had is not looking good for him. The judge certainly wields a lot of power. Impressive and dramatic chapter!
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Where's Eleanor? I'm counting on her to be Donatelli's guardian angel and of course, Jenna's guardian, too. I think she has to make a quick appearance before drug takes effect!
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Where's Eleanor? I'm counting on her to be Donatelli's guardian angel and of course, Jenna's guardian, too. I think she has to make a quick appearance before drug takes effect!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
I'm glad Donatelli is still alive, at least before he starts driving again. That was a rough way to deal with his jealousy. Doyle is despicable; I guess he really does have a plan to take down everyone responsible for his being in prison. Good chapter. Hugs. Carol
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I'm glad Donatelli is still alive, at least before he starts driving again. That was a rough way to deal with his jealousy. Doyle is despicable; I guess he really does have a plan to take down everyone responsible for his being in prison. Good chapter. Hugs. Carol
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from marilyn quillen
alright, I'm ready for more, this is terrible but at least I don't have to wait til next week for the next episode and I do have some things I need to do today, one thing is bath the dog, are you sure you don't have that next piece ready, she really could wait til tomorrow, at least I could really wait for her bath til tomorrow!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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alright, I'm ready for more, this is terrible but at least I don't have to wait til next week for the next episode and I do have some things I need to do today, one thing is bath the dog, are you sure you don't have that next piece ready, she really could wait til tomorrow, at least I could really wait for her bath til tomorrow!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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It's done but I need to read some more so that I have money to post. It's always the money thing! LOL I'll try to read fast!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Am I reading, or watching a Netflix series? Carol. There is so much going on that's tweaking the imagination, that it's impossible to relax and enjoy a moment. The relationship between Jenna and Matthew is ruined, and Matthew has been set up by Doyle to be the next one to suffer some type of loss. You're only on Chapter 6, and so much has already happened. Plus, there's no way to guess where you're taking us next. We'll just have to wait and see.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Am I reading, or watching a Netflix series? Carol. There is so much going on that's tweaking the imagination, that it's impossible to relax and enjoy a moment. The relationship between Jenna and Matthew is ruined, and Matthew has been set up by Doyle to be the next one to suffer some type of loss. You're only on Chapter 6, and so much has already happened. Plus, there's no way to guess where you're taking us next. We'll just have to wait and see.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I've got chapter 7 sitting here....I've had two people tell me to start posting two a day... because I am going to be gone for two weeks in N.C. trying to write on the road. I just know you are going to love-hate what's happening.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I would have guessed that Danni knew Matthew will enough that she would have come to his aid, knowing he was going to do something stupid. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I would have guessed that Danni knew Matthew will enough that she would have come to his aid, knowing he was going to do something stupid. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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She just figured he was mad about something and would be fine after blowing off steam, It's hard to keep up with Donatelli's fits at times.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
You are right, things are getting interesting, and isn't it sad how innocent consoling can be seen and completely misinterpreted. There lies the tragedy of so many failed relationships.
Great fight and I am looking forward tot he next installment.
Tim x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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You are right, things are getting interesting, and isn't it sad how innocent consoling can be seen and completely misinterpreted. There lies the tragedy of so many failed relationships.
Great fight and I am looking forward tot he next installment.
Tim x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Oh and the next chapter should be a doozy! It's ready to be posted...How ar you about reading more than one a day. I've been asked to post faster (2 a day) by some and others say they can't keep up...but they do have four days when I post. Thoughts?
Smiles, Carol
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I am happy with a chapter a day, but can manage more sometimes. Myself, I am posting a chapter a day of my book as I tend to write around 4 chapters a week and don't want to catch up too fast to where I am writing now.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Well Matthew really got himself into a mess by taking off in a jealous huff without finding out the truth of what was happening first. You sure know how to take us through our emotions! Poor Jenna!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Well Matthew really got himself into a mess by taking off in a jealous huff without finding out the truth of what was happening first. You sure know how to take us through our emotions! Poor Jenna!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Poor Jenna and poor Matthew...the ride is just beginning and I can tell you it's not good. Happy reading! Question - one or two chapters a day?
Smiles, Carol
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For me it would be one. I have a lot of trouble keeping up with more than that.
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Okay, thanks...I'm not sure I could keep up with two a day because my son has tests this week end and the beginning of the next and then on the 16th I leave for N.C. where I will try to write while the girls are in school. Oh fun!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Oh my how you twist a tale. I am loving this story more and more. You are so brilliant!!! Aha, I knew Jenna was pregnant, but now the question is, whose is it? Poor Donatelli. He's having a rough night.
Great job my sister from another mister. Keep the story coming I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Oh my how you twist a tale. I am loving this story more and more. You are so brilliant!!! Aha, I knew Jenna was pregnant, but now the question is, whose is it? Poor Donatelli. He's having a rough night.
Great job my sister from another mister. Keep the story coming I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting.
Cecilia
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Hurrah! I hoped you would love it and there is so much more to come. thank you so much for the review and especially for your kindness and comments. I so appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
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Carol,
I am impatiently waiting. I give praise where I deem it right.
Cecilia
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I'm writing.... and I think it's another good one.
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Girlfriend, I have no doubt it's going to be a good one. Waiting!! Right faster (ha, ha) You are brilliant.'
Cecilis
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I probably could post twice a day, but then I would even lose more reviewers. Most don't like to read the long stories.....
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Carol,
If the story is great I don't mind several stories a day, but you do what's best for you. I know my inbox is full of messages for the other people I follow. It's quite consuming.
Cecilia
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It gives us something to look forward too :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh dear, what a mess! Matthew is in for big trouble, what have they got planned for him? We know this has been orchestrated by Doyle, so really, Matthew doesn't stand much of a chance. And what about Jenna? Will she tell Garth the truth? She mustn't keep this to herself. Rape and a baby... No, she must tell him. Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter. Well done, my frined. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Oh dear, what a mess! Matthew is in for big trouble, what have they got planned for him? We know this has been orchestrated by Doyle, so really, Matthew doesn't stand much of a chance. And what about Jenna? Will she tell Garth the truth? She mustn't keep this to herself. Rape and a baby... No, she must tell him. Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter. Well done, my frined. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Good morning, Sandra... I'm in the process of writing at the moment and Matthew has really got himself in deep this time... And Doyle is loving every minute of it and still is planning more. Can't wait till you let me know what you think in the next chapter.... Hang on!
Smiles, Carol
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I think you could post two a day seeing as you only had to write 10,000 words. This is excellent! xxx
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I've already wrote 12,767 and we've only skimmed the surface of the story. I get 17 reviews... but I might lose some if I post more.... and I've been giving more $$ to appear near the top to gain readers, but I don't think that will matter at this point. Either you are reading or not. Those who are in the contest say they are already overloaded.... I don't care about the contest.... I just want to write and know that people are enjoying it.
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Well, you have one here who is thoroughly enjoying it. When will Eleanor come to Jenna's aid? She's the best!!
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Eleanor's about to be torn in several directions and Doyle will be enjoying his revenge. be prepared! And thank you as always!