2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 101 "Joy".
6 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....quite a wonderful portrait you paint based on emotion and the senses. A smell, a touch, they offer instant recall of days of old
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....quite a wonderful portrait you paint based on emotion and the senses. A smell, a touch, they offer instant recall of days of old
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind and helpful review. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dovemarie
HI gypsy, good image of marigold shade flowers mixed with sunrays, your line about apple pie reminds me of thanksgiving. The emotion of "Joy" flows throughout your poem. dove
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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HI gypsy, good image of marigold shade flowers mixed with sunrays, your line about apple pie reminds me of thanksgiving. The emotion of "Joy" flows throughout your poem. dove
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind and helpful review. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful poem of a time that brought joy to you. It it reminiscent of that experience you had. Unlike happiness, joy transcends both bad and good times, and cones from within a deeper place.
RJ
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Beautiful poem of a time that brought joy to you. It it reminiscent of that experience you had. Unlike happiness, joy transcends both bad and good times, and cones from within a deeper place.
RJ
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind and helpful review. 😊
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool form... will have to try this one out - so many emotions...
you did great describing joy
like the sound of "supper time" and the smell of pies in the breeze
nicely done!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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ooh cool form... will have to try this one out - so many emotions...
you did great describing joy
like the sound of "supper time" and the smell of pies in the breeze
nicely done!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a charming poetic form! The emotion is loaded with warmth, cosiness and comfort. And I can absolutely smell that apple pie on the breeze, filtering through my screen. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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What a charming poetic form! The emotion is loaded with warmth, cosiness and comfort. And I can absolutely smell that apple pie on the breeze, filtering through my screen. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
What a cool poem to focus on an emotion and bring in the memories of childhood with sound of mom and smells of apple pie. You know how to conjure up feelings!
is a merigold shade (marigold?)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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What a cool poem to focus on an emotion and bring in the memories of childhood with sound of mom and smells of apple pie. You know how to conjure up feelings!
is a merigold shade (marigold?)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I don't know, in a color palette it says marigold... I'll change it.
Thank you very much 😊 big sister.
Love,
Marival ❤️