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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Okay, I never expected this. Abraham is attempting to kill Danielle and now Oliver is beating him up. Hmm, what is going on? I can't wait to read more.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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What drama! This was unexpected, especially from Abraham, as all eyes had been on Oliver. If anything confirmed the sinister nature of this place, this act of violence is it. Well done, Jacob, for upping the tempo still more. Take care Debbie.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Things are getting violent. Abraham seems to want to kill her; then Oliver seems determined to kill Abraham. Do they all think she called the police officer to come back to the house? Is Oliver plotting to end her life like he ended her parents' lives?

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

Another great chapter of your book. I always get excited when I see that you have a new writing. Danielle just can't get a break. I am curious what Oliver wants with Danielle. Guess time will tell.

Awesome work once again. Sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 04-Nov-2024
    you know I enjoy this book. I want to read the beginning of the book.

    CECILIA
Comment from BethShelby
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This is wild. I can't imagine why he thought she brought the police because they called the police when Noah died. It does sound like he was trying to kill her until Oliver intervened. Grace didn't ask Sarah to return. I would say she is danger and need to get out however she can.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
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Places - Action! And away we go! Great job, Jacob! You came out swinging in this chapter and I was surprised Oliver came to her rescue (well, not totally surprised) but it goes to show he doesn't have control of his temper... cross him and look out. Well done!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Than you, Carol, and for the six stars. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Begin Again on 03-Nov-2024
    You already know I like the surprises and the unexpected. LOL You did a great job!