Portrait in the Attic
An inherited estate, a haunted portrait, and a lake that hol5 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting and eerie story with the changing expressions on the painting, and the uncanny situation with the locket. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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An interesting and eerie story with the changing expressions on the painting, and the uncanny situation with the locket. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great story. I like how you describe the surroundings as if the reader is sitting there watching the action. It has a very spooky feel to it.
You did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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This is a great story. I like how you describe the surroundings as if the reader is sitting there watching the action. It has a very spooky feel to it.
You did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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thank you, i really like to dive right into my stories
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What an engaging story! The gradual buildup of tension, especially with Lydia's spirit, kept me on the edge of my seat. You beautifully captured the connection between Evelyn and Lydia, making their bond feel deep and meaningful. You've written a wonderful tale with just the right blend of suspense and emotion - great work!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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What an engaging story! The gradual buildup of tension, especially with Lydia's spirit, kept me on the edge of my seat. You beautifully captured the connection between Evelyn and Lydia, making their bond feel deep and meaningful. You've written a wonderful tale with just the right blend of suspense and emotion - great work!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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thank you, i always look for your review to make sure you like them
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post, and a great entry in this contest, and really good plot, and what I really like about this particular story that had a happy ending unlike the portrait of Dorian Gray, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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This is an excellent post, and a great entry in this contest, and really good plot, and what I really like about this particular story that had a happy ending unlike the portrait of Dorian Gray, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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thank you, it means a lot to know you like it
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Bless you
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo! What an incredible ghost story and simply a joy to read. (I won't reveal your name, but I happened to go to your profile and see the story.) You've done an exceptional job, and I'm thrilled we are friends because I look forward to more of this descriptive and intriguing writing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Bravo! What an incredible ghost story and simply a joy to read. (I won't reveal your name, but I happened to go to your profile and see the story.) You've done an exceptional job, and I'm thrilled we are friends because I look forward to more of this descriptive and intriguing writing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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this is going to be nonblind also but if yo get the chance could you give my presidents gone wild a check? it's for the presidents contest, I know it is not what they are looking for or expecting, but I'm in a different mood today. if it's inappropriate, I can pull it.