Founding Fighters
The Final Smackdown for America7 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I pray that this is the version we will see come true. Democracy is a blessing and we must stand up and fight to keep it at all costs. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
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I pray that this is the version we will see come true. Democracy is a blessing and we must stand up and fight to keep it at all costs. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Begin Again
I must raise my glass and the stars to commend you on your wit and grace in bringing all the Presidents together to stand up for our country and restore it to a strong and upright position. No longer should we kneel when the flag is raised.
Smiles, Carol
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I must raise my glass and the stars to commend you on your wit and grace in bringing all the Presidents together to stand up for our country and restore it to a strong and upright position. No longer should we kneel when the flag is raised.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
Comment from marilyn quillen
Very interesting story, not sure if i agree with your ending, I could think of a lot better but I could think of a lot worse too. I really did enjoy the story, very well written, lots of great action scenes, wouldn't be bad to see as a movie. all in all A+
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Very interesting story, not sure if i agree with your ending, I could think of a lot better but I could think of a lot worse too. I really did enjoy the story, very well written, lots of great action scenes, wouldn't be bad to see as a movie. all in all A+
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
Comment from lancellot
It's a well written story. Of course, Trump isn't the only living former President but okay. Good action paragraphs, nice speeches and pauses, all along with a hopeful, yet strange if not poetic ending. Harris becomes President, again, by not competing but simply by being handed the throne because of what she is. Poetic indeed.
Very well crafted and possible winning entry.
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It's a well written story. Of course, Trump isn't the only living former President but okay. Good action paragraphs, nice speeches and pauses, all along with a hopeful, yet strange if not poetic ending. Harris becomes President, again, by not competing but simply by being handed the throne because of what she is. Poetic indeed.
Very well crafted and possible winning entry.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from royowen
What an interesting thought, all of them in a real battle, perhaps that's the answer that if there are two candidates they may have a mortal combat, something like David and Goliath, I'm glad David won, because Jesus may not have come, then where would we be, beautifully written, they'd need to be in top physical shape, well done, blessings Roy
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What an interesting thought, all of them in a real battle, perhaps that's the answer that if there are two candidates they may have a mortal combat, something like David and Goliath, I'm glad David won, because Jesus may not have come, then where would we be, beautifully written, they'd need to be in top physical shape, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Luke Nicholas1
What a incredible story in poem. It calls into the very nature of America's birth and how the founding fathers had blood on their sleeve and the stain of democracy is yet born again. It was a lengthy poem but one that deeps digs deep into the heart of the American infancy. I look forward to seeing much more.
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What a incredible story in poem. It calls into the very nature of America's birth and how the founding fathers had blood on their sleeve and the stain of democracy is yet born again. It was a lengthy poem but one that deeps digs deep into the heart of the American infancy. I look forward to seeing much more.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
you had me with the title
and i had to click on this
it only got better. . .
loved the fight and the dialogue between the ghosts
and how you introduced kamala into the story -
"He turned to the horizon, where a figure emerged..."
an excellent story well-written to the prompt.
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
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you had me with the title
and i had to click on this
it only got better. . .
loved the fight and the dialogue between the ghosts
and how you introduced kamala into the story -
"He turned to the horizon, where a figure emerged..."
an excellent story well-written to the prompt.
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024