Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Miracles - Chap 2"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has a good scenario: Peter muttered under his breath. Yanking off his flannel shirt, he raced toward the burning inferno, wrapping his hand because everything was too hot to touch. He raised his arm, shielding his face from the heat. I like how this takes a turn: Doyle straightened, exuding confidence. "They've already made their first mistake by crossing me. I won't let them forget it."
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This has a good scenario: Peter muttered under his breath. Yanking off his flannel shirt, he raced toward the burning inferno, wrapping his hand because everything was too hot to touch. He raised his arm, shielding his face from the heat. I like how this takes a turn: Doyle straightened, exuding confidence. "They've already made their first mistake by crossing me. I won't let them forget it."
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from karenina
How sad for John Doyle that his perceived unchecked power seems to have been "checked" quite deftly! It's entirely consistent with his entitled character that he would be angry yet consider this just another hurdle in the marathon of criminal activity he so enjoys.
So nice to see Eleanor doing what she does best! Margaret didn't make it... I wonder if she'll have a "spirit" after life?
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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How sad for John Doyle that his perceived unchecked power seems to have been "checked" quite deftly! It's entirely consistent with his entitled character that he would be angry yet consider this just another hurdle in the marathon of criminal activity he so enjoys.
So nice to see Eleanor doing what she does best! Margaret didn't make it... I wonder if she'll have a "spirit" after life?
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Oh, busy girl today! I'm thrilled to see that you are almost caught up... Way to go! Now I get to see what you thought.... thanks for using all your time!
Smiles, Carol
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I'm trying my best to chip away at my backlog... Reading this much of your novel and one short story has been a welcome respite for me!
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm be willing to bet that Doyle has something up his sleeve to get this overturned and get out. lol. Well, maybe not, but with you at the controls, we never know for sure what's going to happen. And I love it!
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I'm be willing to bet that Doyle has something up his sleeve to get this overturned and get out. lol. Well, maybe not, but with you at the controls, we never know for sure what's going to happen. And I love it!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Doyle believes the parole hearing was a minor glitch and he'll be back on the streets in no time....his wealth and power blinds him to the truth. Thanks for the awesome stars and for enjoying the chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
A great development from Ch 1 and I did enjoy the parole hearing and the way you conveyed his emotions and the shock at being denied.
I need to do a quick re-read of the chapter I already read then I shall be ready for the next part of this great story.
I really felt for Eleanor, even though I knew it was coming, that part bit.
Tim x
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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A great development from Ch 1 and I did enjoy the parole hearing and the way you conveyed his emotions and the shock at being denied.
I need to do a quick re-read of the chapter I already read then I shall be ready for the next part of this great story.
I really felt for Eleanor, even though I knew it was coming, that part bit.
Tim x
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I hope that you come to love Eleanor the way I do! She's become my favorite character in all my books. Thanks for reading and enjoying.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh John Doyle is a great villain this time! I guess I missed more than I knew when I was reading chapter three ahead of this one lol Silly me. I can see this one is really going to be fun. Good work, Carol.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Oh John Doyle is a great villain this time! I guess I missed more than I knew when I was reading chapter three ahead of this one lol Silly me. I can see this one is really going to be fun. Good work, Carol.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Oh, I am thrilled that you went back and read chapter 2. Every one of these chapters is crammed with stuff. Now you are caught up and I am ready to post another... It's going to be a real action backed book.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
.Mr John Doyle is very sure of his evil power, isn't he. A good read Carol, and now the fun begins as Doyle gets even more of his plans into play but I'm sure it all won't go how he plans. Well done,
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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.Mr John Doyle is very sure of his evil power, isn't he. A good read Carol, and now the fun begins as Doyle gets even more of his plans into play but I'm sure it all won't go how he plans. Well done,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Unfortunately, with his power and wealth a lot will happen before they can stop him and none of it will be good. I so appreciate your support and the stars, Valda. You put a smile on my face because you enjoy what I write. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
This man needs to be put in the ground, where he can't harm anyone again, he's so evil the ground may not stop him, he could be the devil's offsides, or even his superior, but at least as cunning as the devil, but the devil has already lost, by something that evil doesn't understand, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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This man needs to be put in the ground, where he can't harm anyone again, he's so evil the ground may not stop him, he could be the devil's offsides, or even his superior, but at least as cunning as the devil, but the devil has already lost, by something that evil doesn't understand, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I can't wait till Doyle gets what he deserves but in the mean time he will do his best to hurt many people...people we care about. Thanks so much Roy for the kind words and the review.
Smiles, Carol
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Most welcome.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This book is coming along nicely. It's the type of book once you pick it up you don't want to put it down. I'm glad I am able to read it from the beginning. From what I've read so far this book is going to be a number one best seller. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat.
Great job.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Carol,
This book is coming along nicely. It's the type of book once you pick it up you don't want to put it down. I'm glad I am able to read it from the beginning. From what I've read so far this book is going to be a number one best seller. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat.
Great job.
Cecilia
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thanks for your generous comments, Cecelia. this is the third in the series and I think it's the best...at least it is in my mind though it's not written yet. LOL I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
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You deserve them. You are a great author
Comment from marilyn quillen
ooooohhhhhhhhh, here we go, i have very little patience, write fast!!! I already love it! great plan, great writing, great characters, great dialog, all around everything is great
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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ooooohhhhhhhhh, here we go, i have very little patience, write fast!!! I already love it! great plan, great writing, great characters, great dialog, all around everything is great
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I can write fast, but most say it's too much to throw at them at one time...they perfer the short cute things. Me...I like to get into the brawl and come out slinging.... Glad you enjoy the story. Chapter 3 is posted.
Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Doyle is a lot more dangerous after his ten years in prison. He has already had his wife murdered and broken Eleanor's heart. He has the power and money and influence to do a lot of terrible things even from prison.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Doyle is a lot more dangerous after his ten years in prison. He has already had his wife murdered and broken Eleanor's heart. He has the power and money and influence to do a lot of terrible things even from prison.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Yes, Doyle has had lots of time to stew about his situation and make plans for payback. I am afraid our friends will have to be very careful. He's already proven how dangerous he can be. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol