The Rainbow of Us
The colors of human emotions8 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Hi Anonymous,
Excellent poem that touched my heart and made it leap with hope. You paint such a beautiful and accurate picture of human emotions and how valuable they are. Even negative ones need to be respected for all of us have them ...when we're "in the red" so to speak, we need to learn from it and dissolve into an understanding of ourselves...processing through the kaleidoscope of the human emotions that make us who we are ...the Arc of Us as you so beautifully expressed.
Your talent is with a glowing heart, deeply understanding human nature with love.
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Anonymous,
Excellent poem that touched my heart and made it leap with hope. You paint such a beautiful and accurate picture of human emotions and how valuable they are. Even negative ones need to be respected for all of us have them ...when we're "in the red" so to speak, we need to learn from it and dissolve into an understanding of ourselves...processing through the kaleidoscope of the human emotions that make us who we are ...the Arc of Us as you so beautifully expressed.
Your talent is with a glowing heart, deeply understanding human nature with love.
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
I found your poem creative and original.
and I love all your poetic expressions for each shade.
This line is the core of your poem:
each color, a single heartbeat
in the spectrum of being.
Beautiful said!
Best of luck!
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
I found your poem creative and original.
and I love all your poetic expressions for each shade.
This line is the core of your poem:
each color, a single heartbeat
in the spectrum of being.
Beautiful said!
Best of luck!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
I really enjoyed this poem and love the way you bring each colour into a new verse, tying it up at the end into a pure vision of home.
Thank you for sharing this. It touched me.
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I really enjoyed this poem and love the way you bring each colour into a new verse, tying it up at the end into a pure vision of home.
Thank you for sharing this. It touched me.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
The metaphors are well written in your rainbow poem for the contest. I like that you included all of the colors, each with an interesting emotion, and then a summary statement at the end. You have some nice alliteration here and there. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
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The metaphors are well written in your rainbow poem for the contest. I like that you included all of the colors, each with an interesting emotion, and then a summary statement at the end. You have some nice alliteration here and there. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
A delightful piece of work that quite accurately reflects the colours of the rainbow with a range of human emotions.
This poem, with its bold use of colour imagery to evoke human emotions, is a captivating exploration of the inner world. The poet skillfully weaves together vibrant hues with complex feelings, creating a tapestry of sensory experiences that resonate deeply.
This poem is an enchanting exploration of the relationship between colour and emotion. Its unique perspective, vivid imagery, and emotional depth make it a compelling read.
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A delightful piece of work that quite accurately reflects the colours of the rainbow with a range of human emotions.
This poem, with its bold use of colour imagery to evoke human emotions, is a captivating exploration of the inner world. The poet skillfully weaves together vibrant hues with complex feelings, creating a tapestry of sensory experiences that resonate deeply.
This poem is an enchanting exploration of the relationship between colour and emotion. Its unique perspective, vivid imagery, and emotional depth make it a compelling read.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how you share emotions through color! I like how each hue shares a distinct feeling. The way you show the warmth of orange laughter with the cool blue is perfect. The ending, describing colors as a "bridge between storms," is so strongly written. For me that feels like you are describing life's journey. Great job!
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I love how you share emotions through color! I like how each hue shares a distinct feeling. The way you show the warmth of orange laughter with the cool blue is perfect. The ending, describing colors as a "bridge between storms," is so strongly written. For me that feels like you are describing life's journey. Great job!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You describe the gambit of human emotion here and I enjoyed your unusual approach to this contest, we are diverse and full of colourful and deep chaos at times, love Dolly x x x
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You describe the gambit of human emotion here and I enjoyed your unusual approach to this contest, we are diverse and full of colourful and deep chaos at times, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse offering for the contest here -- your use of the ROYGBIV color scheme to describe human emotions and their manifestations is a wonderful vision of the rainbow! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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A beautiful free verse offering for the contest here -- your use of the ROYGBIV color scheme to describe human emotions and their manifestations is a wonderful vision of the rainbow! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024