Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Chapter 24 Willing Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from lyenochka
Lol. It's good that Noah didn't get barfed on! This chapter shows us how the relationship between Noah and Sami is growing and maturing. They understand each other and know the needs of Noah's stressful job.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Lol. It's good that Noah didn't get barfed on! This chapter shows us how the relationship between Noah and Sami is growing and maturing. They understand each other and know the needs of Noah's stressful job.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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LOl Thank you for the kind reviewing.
Comment from GWHARGIS
You get the six because the chapter was so good, but also, because the last line made me laugh while I was drinking my morning coffee. I had to wipe my screen off. I loved how everyone's personality popped out in this chapter. I've seen glimpses of each but in this chapter they all popped. So enjoying this book. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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You get the six because the chapter was so good, but also, because the last line made me laugh while I was drinking my morning coffee. I had to wipe my screen off. I loved how everyone's personality popped out in this chapter. I've seen glimpses of each but in this chapter they all popped. So enjoying this book. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. Sorry about the coffee. LOL
Comment from Esther Brown
I am really liking this story. I actually put aside the book I was reading for a bit and am glad. Sami and Noah seem like real people now and I look forward to the next chapter. Esther
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I am really liking this story. I actually put aside the book I was reading for a bit and am glad. Sami and Noah seem like real people now and I look forward to the next chapter. Esther
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement and support.
Comment from nomi338
Please allow me to say with complete honest conviction, I love this story. As much as I want the story complete with Sami and Noah being free to express their love for each other. I am going to be sad when the story ends as it must at some point.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Please allow me to say with complete honest conviction, I love this story. As much as I want the story complete with Sami and Noah being free to express their love for each other. I am going to be sad when the story ends as it must at some point.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. They've expressed their love, but will they be able to work out the mechanics of a serious relationship?
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great question. Only you know for sure.
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HMMMM?
Comment from Ulla
So their love for each other is finally coming out. It's a out time also, if you don't mind me saying that. It's great writing as always. Now to get to the remaining third of the story. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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So their love for each other is finally coming out. It's a out time also, if you don't mind me saying that. It's great writing as always. Now to get to the remaining third of the story. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I'm wondering if love is enough to hold this couple together. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Of course Noah and Sami have already ascertained their love for one another, but managing those boundaries in which their relationship develops is much more difficult, but that's very much part of any relationship, between two strong people, beautifully written. Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Of course Noah and Sami have already ascertained their love for one another, but managing those boundaries in which their relationship develops is much more difficult, but that's very much part of any relationship, between two strong people, beautifully written. Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Yes, even though they love each other, we'll have to wait and see if they can work out the problems. Thank you for the kind review.
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That's right, well done Barbara
Comment from Ric Myworld
The love bugs are really bitten now and willingly open to telling the world. Working in a world far different than anywhere we'd picture them being. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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The love bugs are really bitten now and willingly open to telling the world. Working in a world far different than anywhere we'd picture them being. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
What comes through in this chapter is the difficulties couples have in dealing with frustrating and tense work situations that can spill over into their relationship. It comes through in dialogue here between Sami and Noah, and I think you did a good job of putting plenty of emotion in the voices so that we feel as readers what is going on here. estory
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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What comes through in this chapter is the difficulties couples have in dealing with frustrating and tense work situations that can spill over into their relationship. It comes through in dialogue here between Sami and Noah, and I think you did a good job of putting plenty of emotion in the voices so that we feel as readers what is going on here. estory
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
It is almost over. I will finish reading the Cord and Alex story until the new one starts. I hope you and you family has a very good week. Good writing, Happy Halloeween. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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It is almost over. I will finish reading the Cord and Alex story until the new one starts. I hope you and you family has a very good week. Good writing, Happy Halloeween. Karen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the wonderful support.
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You are a great writer. I hope your new publisher gets you lots of sales. Karen
Comment from Douglas Goff
A fun, light hearted chapter. Feels like we are building to something. I am interested to see where you are going with that brilliant mind.
You have made Mondays, fundays! Bless you!
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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A fun, light hearted chapter. Feels like we are building to something. I am interested to see where you are going with that brilliant mind.
You have made Mondays, fundays! Bless you!
D
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Brillant mind? I believe you're thinking of somebody else. Thank you for the kind review.